Traditional Art Drawing in class...

Eh I was bored during 6th period, so my friend Mia and I were doodling. I made my very own member of the organization. I think his name was Xoul... I drew the top one she drew the bottom... she's a better artist but still
I've never taken an art class so don't hate... ^ ^

 

Hmm... Good job.

The hair on the 1st boy, at the top, looks a bit awkward . . . I don't know why. I'd say near his bangs. <_< But it's a good drawing, nonetheless. Oh, and did you forget to give him an arm? Or is his coat just hanging from his shoulders? O.o'
Good shading btw, but you could've made it better.

The secons boy is much better than the first one, even without the color/shading. I like his expression, and he does not seem to look a little awkward like the 1st boy.


GOOD JOB.

 

ty for the tips ^ ^