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  1. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    Right, righhhhtttttt.

    I can't wait!, lately KHV has been giving birth to such good stories, it's hard to resist.
     
  2. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    -Ultra fanboy squeal-

    That was such a good chapter! Noise youre doing such a great job with this.
     
  3. Sumi suicidé

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    Nice job! I'm loving this story!​
     
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    Chapter 5

    Chapter 5
    “PE is now my favorite classâ€

    I have History after math, so everyday I wave goodbye to Wyatt and head in the opposite direction then he does, and to make matters worse…he always leaves me with a smile. After history is lunch, and to my luck I have the same lunch with Wyatt, but he sit’s at a different table, and I don’t sit anywhere, I grab a sandwich and go to the library and read a book, I love reading so whenever I get the chance to read I take it.

    The book I was currently reading was “His Dark Materials by Philip Pullman†it was very good, so I spent the whole lunch period reading and sneaking bits of my sandwich. Then it was off to PE, I had PE with Wyatt, even though we changed in the same locker room I had yet to see him…with his shirt off.

    But just the thought of it made me very red, I always got red before I got to the locker room, before I got to the door, I heard his soft gentle voice from across the hall.

    “hey there math whiz†I turned and to stare at him.
    “your talking to me?†I asked shocked, I looked around thinking he was talking to someone else, but it was only me and him in the hallway.

    “yeah!†he reached the door before me and opened it wide “smart people first†and he gestured me to go in first, and naturally I blushed and walked in. Now is the time Wyatt would walk to the other end of the locker room change near all his football buddies (oh did I forget to mention he’s the center on the varsity team?…for those of you that don’t know, the center is the one that hand of the ball to the quarterback), but not today.

    Today he walked right behind me, I could feel his eyes on me, my mind went wild, I walked to my locker and started to put in the combination, and so did he, only he was doing it to the locker right next to mine.
    “you moved lockers†I said trying to sound casual, but my heart was racing a million miles an hour.
    “yeah there’s more room over here, and its closer to the showersâ€
    I dropped my stuff on my foot, it hurt and I let out a scream. Wyatt spun around and had the oddest look on his face, for a second I thought I saw him look, almost like he was very worried…about me?, no I must have imagined it. Once he say I was fine he continued to change, and he took of his shirt, his back was facing me, and as he moved to get his shirt, I saw every muscle in his back. It was big and brawny, he was so strong, I could tell.

    He then pulled down his pants, I blushed and looked away, I couldn’t look so I got dressed and after a bit I heard him say “see ya in the gym in a bit Emâ€
    And I heard the door close.

    …he called me Em…he gave my a nickname.
    PE is now my favorite class, I thought to myself and walked out of the locker room smiling.
     
  5. Sumi suicidé

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    Aww, I love this story more and more! You're such an amazing writer Noise!​
     
  6. Noise For Love and Justice

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    xD sumi i love you xDD

    fyi: im so!!! bored...that chapter 6 will be posted tonight...and maybe chapter 7 (but for sure Ch 6)
     
  7. Sumi suicidé

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    Thanks! I'll watch for it! *hugs*​
     
  8. Noise For Love and Justice

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    good you better be xD

    im so glad people like it! you all have no idea!
     
  9. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    Lulz.

    That was actually very funny....I think I couldn't live with myself If I had to change in locker rooms...Luckyly....I don't have to, besides I couldn't live without playing volleyball in a team XD.

    I would like to play Football someday, they tell me I have the body to do it(though I don't feel that's a compliment....well isn't clear why?)....I prefer singing.

    Anyways, nice chapter xD.

    I just have one question.....well a couple.

    Why is your boyfriend perfect?

    Did you really move?

    How did you meet your boyfriend IRL?

    Are you really on the same school!?

    Why is your story so cool?
     
  10. Noise For Love and Justice

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    Chapter 6!

    Why is your boyfriend perfect?- because! hes everything that i ever wanted hes strong and smart and super nice, i love him to death

    Did you really move? no it would make the my character seem more akward and shy towards the rest

    How did you meet your boyfriend IRL? at a camp

    Are you really on the same school!? no he lives a few hours away

    Why is your story so cool?

    xD idk but im glad u love it

    ------------part of a conversation with Hymn^^^ not part of Chapter 6 which is below VVVVVV-------------------


    Chapter 6
    “ Teddy Bear ”

    The next day went my as normal, Wyatt helped me with math, and I went to history, but something that was new, was that Wyatt was waiting for me after history, “hey! Emmett!” he called, as if on cue I started to blush.

    “hey Wyatt, how are you?”
    “oh I’m good, but your not” my body froze, what? What did that mean? “ you have been eating lunch in the library, for the last two weeks of school and this is not ok” he sounded like a teacher,

    “ok ok” I said “ I wont eat in the library anymore” damn now where was I going to read.
    “good, because from now on your eating lunch at our table” he smiled, I melted at the site of his dimples.

    “o-okay” I stammered, great first Lit, then Math, then PE. I blushed thinking about what I saw yesterday. I followed him to the lunch room, and he lead me to the table, four people turned and looked at me, all but one smiled back at me, as if they knew something I didn’t.

    “Everyone this is Emmett” said Wyatt to his group of friends
    He went around in order closes to him. “that’s Carly” she was very pretty, she was tall and skinny with long blonde hair that curled at the ends she had blue eyes and a kind face, she smiled back at me and I smiled.

    “Next is Roxann” he pointed, he was pretty too, she had short brown hair that fell below her jaw line, she had dark skin, she was shorter than Carly but still just as pretty. “she moved her last year from Texas” she gave me a wink and giggled.

    “Tyler” Wyatt said annoyed. Tyler looked up at me and gave me a half hearted smile, he was cute he had short jet black hair, he was just a little taller than me, he looked fit, but something about him made me nervous.

    “and last but not least, is Jade” he said
    “thanks Wyatt” replied Jade, her voice was bubbly, she seem very nice and very happy, she was pretty too, with Carmel brown hair that was tied into a pony, she had such beautiful eyes too, they were green, bright green. I smiled at her and she smiled back.

    Wyatt and I walked to the lunch line, it was Tacos, I love spicy food, and so does Wyatt to my astonishment, we sat down at the table and started to eat. Everyone was mostly done eating and having a good time talking and laughing, I just sat there eating and watching them, they seemed so nice, and after Jade told a joke, I laughed. For the first time in weeks I laughed, and I also heard Wyatt right next to me laugh too, his laugh was so cute it made him seem like…


    a teddy bear…my teddy bear​
     
  11. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    Lol...my sister calls me her big teddy bear to hug xD.

    this last part was to describe the new characters, I want to see where this goes, mainly because it's cool story.

    keep it up, it's so good...now I wanna see what happens next!
     
  12. Noise For Love and Justice

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    Chapter 7!!

    Chapter 7
    “ he likes meâ€

    The rest of my day went by slowly, it wasn’t as exciting as lunch had been, but it turned out that I had my afternoon classes with Carly and Jade.

    “so, your gay right?†Jade asked with a whisper in chemistry.
    I didn’t see any point to hide it, so I told her yes. She smiled softy and replied more to herself than me, “good, im gladâ€. I stared at her confused, what was great?, but the final bell rang before I had time to talk to her more. The school day was done, and so I gathered my things and left the class room, very confused.

    I headed to my locker and before I got there I saw him, he was standing by in front of my locker holding his phone open, apparently he just got a funny text cause he was smiling. Once I got closer to my locker and we saw each other, Wyatt closed his phone and moved aside so I could open my locker.

    “doing anything after school?†he asked.
    “going home I guess†I put all my books in my locker, I didn’t have homework, which meant a night of reading.
    “cause, I was wondering if you…wanted to hang out?â€
    There was something wrong here, his voice, it wasn’t the same he sounded…nervous. Why was HE nervous, he wasn’t the one being asked to hang out by the hottest guy on planet Earth.

    “umm sure, let me call my parentsâ€, I grabbed my cell phone in my pocket, and dialed there number. “mom?†I asked.
    “yeah Emmett whats up?†she sounded in a good mood, I crossed my fingers. “can I hang out with a friend tonight?â€
    “you made a friend!!!! Oh! Emmett! Of course be home before 10â€
    “mom it’s a Fridayâ€
    “oh then 12:30 have fun!â€
    “thanks mom love youâ€

    I hung up, and turned to look at Wyatt, his face was tense, I have him the thumbs up. The reaction was almost instant, all the tension in his face melted away and he gave me a wide smile. We walked out to the student parking lot, he had a car…I had to use the bus.

    “its not much†he said pointing at the small blue car, it was nice.
    We got in and he drove about 5 minutes to his house, it was a nice big white two story house, we walked in and I noticed it was so warm and inviting, we walked up to his room. The first thing I noticed was that it smelled like him, it make me a bit dizzy so I sat down on his bed, it was a queen.
    “this is my bat cave†he laughed, it was big, bigger than my room. It had white walls with white carpet and a huge window that let a lot of sun in.
    “ we sat there and talked for a bit, just about his life and his family, he was an only child, his mother was a nurse and his father was a doctor, they both worked at the same hospital so they weren’t home at the same time very much.

    “My parents aren’t going to be home tonightâ€
    “ you must be lonely†I said, he smiled
    “nahh I like it, gives me time to think†he then turned to me and looked me straight in the eyes, I felt like I was being pulled in, his eyes were so big I couldn’t help but stare back, and blush.
    We sat like that for was seemed like hours, till he broke the silence.
    “Emmett, I have to tell you something†he reached for my hand and put his on top of mine. I froze, I felt my heart beat getting faster and faster.

    “I think im falling for you Emmett†my heart stopped. Wait, this cant be real. I started back at him, waiting for him to laugh and yell “gotcha!â€
    But he didn’t, he just kept staring at me, he was waiting for a reply.
    He likes me! I thought to myself I started to blush.

    “I…I think im falling for you too Wyatt†all the tension in the room melted away, he gave me the biggest smile ever, and pulled me in for a hug.
    After a minute or two, he pulled away and looked me in the eyes and he was so close to my face, we were inches aparand he asked me the question I was dieing to hear.

    “ Will you be my boyfriend?â€
    “yes†I replied

    And he leaned in and kissed me on the lips.
     
  13. Rayku Kingdom Keeper

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    Wow nosie, that was so good, keep it up!
     
  14. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    Lulz!!!!!

    I must admit, I was a bit excited, I was like, "what's gonna happen!?"

    But then again.....You two in the house alone....just a kiss...phah! You just did that because the story is PG-13.....JK.

    And finally he said it xD,

    That was fast, a kiss already!?....man he goes for what he wants quick! xD.

    Good chapter....very good chapter.
     
  15. Noise For Love and Justice

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    i wish i could go more than a kiss...but i will in another chapter

    and thanks! xD im not writing any more today cause i wrote like 3 in 4 hours

    Bl i was also doing other things too
     
  16. Sumi suicidé

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    Awww, Noise, you are one rock-hard writer! This is on my list of top 5 stories&books!​
     
  17. Noise For Love and Justice

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    awwww really?

    ur so amazing xD
     
  18. Sumi suicidé

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    Thank You and seriously!
    1. Marley & Me -read it two years ago and loved it
    2. The Two Princesses of Bamarre -same person who wrote Ella Enchanted, but this book isn't a Cinderella story
    3. Drama! -yep, the one and only!
    4. Rex and the City -if you haven't guessed by now, I love dogs
    5. Flowers for Algernon -i read it 9 times the week before break -_-​
     
  19. Noise For Love and Justice

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    now ur just sucking up

    xDD darn
     
  20. Sumi suicidé

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    No, I'm dead serious. Although number 4 needs to be changed to Bite Me [how clever >.>]​