Don't cry Dinesty

Discussion in 'Archives' started by JedininjaZC, Dec 8, 2007.

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how is this poem?

Poll closed Dec 10, 2007.

  1. fantasic!!

    8 vote(s)
    72.7%

  2. keep working on it

    2 vote(s)
    18.2%

  3. you call that a poem?

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    9.1%
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  1. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    It very good, but like Nymph said, repair the grammar errors.
     
    Laplace, Dec 9, 2007
    Laplace, Dec 9, 2007
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  2. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    spell check is done
     
    JedininjaZC, Dec 9, 2007
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  3. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    how the hell do u always find the grammer mistakes wen i cant.... -_- lol great poem ZC
     
    Sadden Blood Warrior, Dec 9, 2007
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