Hey KH Vids. I've been trying to make a fanfic called Doctor Who Into the Unknown. Here's my draft of it. The Doctor coughed as he tried to get up as his time machine tumbled around in the empty space. Guess I hit the wrong buttons again... he thought as he stood up. The Doctor then looked at his control panel that had a 3D image of what was outside of his time machine. Everything was pitch black like that of a dark hole. Maybe he was in one. How do you guys like it? Just give me a holler and I'll write more.
Its pretty good, I'd personally like to see more. Also, if you're interested in DW, I'm putting together a radio-mini series crossover of DW and another show called Stargate. I'm in the process of adapting the story for radio, and I'm looking for voice actors, would you be interested?
just send me a PM with your email, and I'll send you the original story. Then you'll decide which character you're interested in voicing.
Yay another Doctor Who fan. I don't like it ..... I love it. I'm working on some DW stories as well. Just one thing which doctor is it? (as there is more then one.) I'm guessing it's either 10th or 11th. Nice to meet you by the way :)
Interesting . . . in a way. I'd suggest switching out "time machine" for TARDIS though, unless you'd rather not or that's part of the story. Spelling and grammar are alright except for the dialogue. It would be helpful for the dialogue to be wrapped in "quotes" . . . This at least signifies that a character is talking. I know that you've italicized them, but it's still slightly hard to distinguish the dialogue from the rest of the text. I'd really like to see more of this, hopefully you post another Chapter soon, a tad bit longer. Anyway, good job ^^
Ooooh you're a Whovian too! Great opening, eerie right from the get go. Keep going keep going~ So is Eleven alone this time around?
