Traditional Art Do not look xD

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Cherry Berry, Jul 16, 2008.

  1. Cherry Berry Chaser

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    Do not look xD <.<

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    Lol, I truley suck at drawing in boredom xD

    8D Well, still reacting to red-bull so I'm happy

    I know body proportions suck xD

    *Puts on Linkin Park*
     
  2. reptar REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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    I like this, but there is stuff about it, one she obviously looks young, so don't have her breasts hang like that
    her legs are a bit stubby that is all, but i really like this :D
     
  3. Cherry Berry Chaser

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    Well... That's not my best one xD

    I had an idea it sorta sucked... But continued at 2am xD

    I'll scan one of my better pictures... xD
     
  4. Aura Goddess

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    This is very good.I like it.But I really don't like what you did with her leg.I love her hair.And like Reptar said,you shouldn't have left her breast hanging out like that.Maybe you just should have put a small curve around that area.But everything else I see is fine.Nicely done.
     
  5. Cherry Berry Chaser

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    Lol xD

    For some reason, I know know why I had a bad feeling about drawing them legs and the special boob xD

    Thanks, I'll try and fix that!!
     
  6. Hissora ahurhurhur.

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    Cuuuute~
    Here's some CnC

    Wait a sec...
    Is she supposed to be a chibi or what? o-o

    Anyway, proportions are so off, m'dear, it seems that your arms, the farther they go down, get unnaturally skinny, even for anime syle. And she has no elbows, It just bends. Here's a lesson about arms, there not really rectangles, their more rounded, same for legs.
    Now for hands, I've always measured hands as long as the chin to the eyebrow. Right now, your hands are as big as the eyes... and that's not good.
    Her body seems to have no curves, she's just a rectangle. Women, even teenagers, have an hour glass shape.
    Okay, HUGE problem with her breast, it's droopy and over to the side. That's no good! It needs to be pushed to a left a bit and rounded for well UMF feeling.

    Okay, so now for her clothes, nice design, very interesting and j-poppy. The backdrop for her skirt REALLY isn't necessary, we would be able to figure out it's rounded. Put some wrinkles for realism in there!

    Good job, and you do have potential. Keep drawing!
     
  7. sinister King's Apprentice

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    it looks very cute!!
    how come everyone in this site are such good artists?
     
  8. Fayt-Harkwind Where yo curly mustache at?

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    I like the costume but whats with the Leopard in a box i'm too lazy to figure it out?
     
  9. Cherry Berry Chaser

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    Lol, good cnc xD Thanks for the awesome tips, will use them for future drawings!!

    Ok, I'll show a different picture, and it will hopefully be a chibi and better looking xDD


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    Because this is in pencil, I can edit it a lot better xD

    P.s. The leopard in the first pic was drawn for no reason xD

    It was 2am... My mind wasn't thinking!!
     
  10. sinister King's Apprentice

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    looks great!!
    i like manga style...
     
  11. Cherry Berry Chaser

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    :cryinganime:

    I don't know, there's something missing in the chibi, but what? o_o


    Need... More... Red... BULL!!
     
  12. Bond of Flame I'm an alien

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    Sounds strange but, she reminds me a bit af Yuffie :D
    It looks good, especially the star!
     
  13. Hubba-Bubba-Bubbles Hollow Bastion Committee

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    You do not suck I love this and I think it's really good the bodies look fine to me....​
     
  14. Cherry Berry Chaser

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    ^^ I'm still developing my art skills, thanks for both compliments and cnc's. I'll take that both into account for my future work.
     
  15. MadDoctorMaddie I'm a doctor, not a custom title!

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    I can't stand it when people, who are obviously talented drawers bash their own work... You draw ten times better than I do, the only things I can draw that look okay are clothes and female eyes... and bunnies...
     
  16. CookieTheKeyToDestiny Moogle Assistant

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    Sis, your drawings are good o_o

    Oh yeah, Pedro just woke up... Yer have to get off now if you want to see him...

    Why are you putting yourself down? xD <= Damn you with your xD's
     
  17. Chad Thundercucc The dharma of valvu; the dream of a clatoris

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    I like it. The only thing I could complain about is that her breasts shouldn't be sagging like that since she's young and her left hand should be showing her knuckles, not her fingers when holding a kunai knife.