Distortion

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Jayn, Oct 16, 2008.

  1. Jayn

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    Im not sure its good enough for that...Thank you though. =D Im glad youre actually reading it x3​

    I really appreciate your honesty. It helps a lot. Thank you for reading this far. <3 ​
     
  2. Jayn

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    No,not an update. Sorry. ^^; I'm just saying that I AM working on another chapter and I'm sorry for taking so long...
    ; ; ​
     
  3. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    So you're incorporating the twilight thing, so everyone knows who is narrating, pretty clever, maybe i should do the same to my story.


    the chapter was good, the flashback was good too....the emotions are good, it's all right.
     
  4. Jayn

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    A/N:Whoa. Yeah, I said I was writing more =P. Still, it's been a while and I just want to change a few things.

    The story will ultimately be the same thing, but I will not be writing in first person anymore. I've seemed to have lost touch with the characters v_v; So this may just be temporary.

    I'll still be writing more. This was just a bit of a...preview, I guess. Of the new format at least. Or style of writing. Chapter five will probably be longer if I find the time.

    Anyways...

    ***UPDATED***
     
  5. Most Wanted Moogle Assistant

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    Where have I read this before?

    Did you enter it in a contest or something? I swear I've read it before.


    As for the comment, very well written. I'm looking forward to more actually. The first story I've decided to read :3 Congrats.

    -Is not that self absorbed-​
     
  6. Most Wanted Moogle Assistant

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    I see.

    Makes sense.

    You and I should write together sometime.

    Anyways, update soon.​
     
  7. Arch Mana Knight

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    Love, you forgot to mention you updated. You write so much more than me...you're such a great writer. <3