Digital Art Digging in the drit to find the places we got hurt

Used this tut:
http://www.gimptalk.com/forum/music-tutorial-t35152.html

made these

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CnC please :3

EDIT:
Did something different with the colors.

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hope these are a little better.

 

Cloud himself is too bright, so ease up on the lighting effect there. The background colors look as if you made the saturation ridiculously high on a C4D. Messing with saturation is fine, but overdoing it is a definite no-no. Ease up on whatever you did to make the background so... strong, color wise. This looks like it could look nice if overall it wasn't so bright and strong. Take it down a notch, it'll probably make it look much better.

 

The colour, and the colour scheme is really bad. The text is pretty nasty too. Sorry to sound harsh, other than that it's okay, I mean depth is good, but it's plain and not nice to look at.

 

The technique looks nice, but the colors are just too ugly to ignore. Change them to something more appealing. Also, the text looks bland, and the overall contrast not very interesting.

 

alright. I did my best to fix the colors. I got rid of the one effect that made the strange colors, everything else is the stock I used for the background.

 

Very random color scheme going there. I prefer the 2nd version, but its all very random. Readsa some tuts and practice a bit more.

 

I like the text, the effect with it is nice, but the font is kinda bland. The background itself like everyone else says is a bit ugly, but you could make that better just by editting it some.
You could also make Cloud himself flow more with the whole tag maybe by focusing on him more, and brushing him in some. It looks like you Copy Pasted on there.