Another design sketch. As you can tell I got lazy on the middle and far left ones and didn't bother to revise certain things. CnC the suckage.
The middle is my favorite. ^^ I like how you make his scarf move like that. I like how you design their clothes except the right one. Try making a nice design or pattern on his shirt because it looks too plain. An excellent job on the lower body areas and creases. Now I want to see you start shading them. Try cross-hatch which is my favorite and it seems it will work on your art too. Good luck. ^^ *purrs*
the first one's hair looks awesome second, the scarf is cool, i cant draw wind effect like that xD overall, very good.... better than i can do xD
I liked the hair on two of three. Well the far right one is supposed to be conservative and I think adding patterning would be something of a betrayal. BUt I thank you anyways. Eh, I'm alright, I'm sure you can do better if you try. I also don't like the far left hair, it is too gaudy for me, I actually went back and altered it later.
? Betrayal? How so? Oh and I overlooked the left person. I kinda noticed the sword. I see no handle, no blade at an angle, and pretty much a line. Is he swinging it or is it just to mark the place where the sword exists? *purrs*
