Demyx's new life

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  1. Doukuro Chaser

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    I got bored again. Who knew being grounded could be so boring? xD And my avi insipred this

    Short intro. Chapter one is almost done and I will post it sometime durring this week.

    ~Intro~

    Rain fell from the dark and clouded sky. It hit the trees of a forest and then fell to the ground. Under on tree laid Demyx. After a couple of rain drops hit his face he slowly opened his eyes as much as he could before sitting up and moving backwards so he leaned against the tree. Can't beieve I'm alive... He thought as he closed his eyes again. He was weak and tired and soon passed out again.

    In the forest close by a girl with blonde hair tied back in a blue ribbon, tan skin, light blue eyes, and she wore a bagy purple shirt and blue jeans that were now soaked. She was a walk when it suddenly started to pour and now she hurried back to her house. That was when she saw someone out cold leaning up against a tree. And being as kind hearted as she was she just had to help. She went to his side and bend down and shook him lightly trying to wake him. "Wake up time." She muttered but had no luck. She went to go get some help and came back with an old guy who helped carry him back to their house.


    Seriously. I was bored out of my mind. So it was either write this or shoot things at people. The second one didn't turn out so good....xD

    CnC?
     
  2. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    It was short, but very well described:D I liked the way you pictured the girl. In my head , she's pretty:D Good job, if your continuing, I'm looking forward to it:D
     
  3. Doukuro Chaser

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    Coming from you that means a lot to me. Thanks :D