Demon Slayer chapter 4!

Sorry it took so long! I had the WORST case of writer's block!

Demon Slayer chapter 4

Kyle stared at the girl who saved him. She wore a light blue shirt, blue vest, blue cape, blue boots, and dark blue pants. She had long brown hair and light green eyes. "Who the hell are you!?" shouted Flame. "My name is Tina." she said, cooly.
Flame charged towards her. She smiled and drew a longsword from her side. He attacked and she blocked. "How are you able to use fire!?" he asked, furious. "I am a sorcerous." she answered. He swung at her head and she jumped back. Their swords clashed again and again. Kyle saw all of this and was shocked by how strong Tina was.
Their swords clashed one more time. They struggled to push the other back. Tina smiled and put her hand on his chest. She said "WATER!" and a jet of water shot out of her hand. It went right through Flame's body. She jumped back and he burst into flames. His body went into Kyle's necklace. Kyle walked up to her and asked "You want to join me in my quest to slay demons?"

What will Tina say? Find out in chapter 5!

EDIT: Sorry it's so short.

 

Really great and ending on a cliff-hanger. I will definitely be reading on. Cool.

 

Aww can't wait till chapter 5!

 

Demon Slayer chapter 5!

I HATE WRITER'S BLOCK!!!!!!!!!!!! DX< :p

Demon Slayer chapter 5

"Sure." said Tina, "Where are we going next?" "Brazil." Kyle answered. "That is where another one of my creations, Aquina, is flooding villages." "Creation?" she asked, "You created them?" "Well not on purpose!" he said, getting on his motorcycle. "Hop on." "No thanks." she said, pulling out a broom. "Fine. There is a boat leaving for Brazil in a couple of minutes." he said, starting up his bike, "I'm getting on that boat." He sped off with Tina following him on her broom.
The next day, they arrived in Brazil. They asked where the flooded villages were. Turns out, they were near one that was being flooded as they spoke! The two of them went to the village and saw a woman in a floral dress flooding everything. Her skin was a light blue and she looked like she was made of water! "AQUINA!" Kyle shouted. She looked over and saw him. "Ah. Kyle, how nice to see you again." she said with a laugh. "Cut the crap!" he said, running at her with his sword drawn. He slashed but the blade went right through her! "Tisk tisk tisk." she said, smiling. "You haven't forgotten that I'm made of water have you?" She sent a jet of water at him, knocking him into Tina. A cage of water formed around them and froze.
Suddenly, there was a flash of light and a guy appeared out of nowhere! He was wearing goggles over his eyes, a black shirt, and a light blue vest. His hair was red and he was smiling. "Who the hell are you!?" asked Aquina. "The name's Dumas, Cloud Dumas!" he answered. He threw some powder on her, making her solid. "Damn you!" she said, taking out her sword and charging at him. He blocked her attack and had a sword fight. Eventually the powder wore off and she was liquid again. Cloud jumped back and pulled out his gun. "That can't hurt me now!" she said, laughing. He grinned and fired one shot at her. It hit her in the forhead and she was immedeatly electrocuted. "That was my lightning bullet." he said, as she exlpoded. He pushed up his goggles and revealed his bright orange eyes.

Sorry it took so long to write this! :(

 

Wow! That was awsome, I can't wait till chapter 6!

 

Thanks! :D Some of the characters in this are actually some of the RP's I've joined. Here are the ones you know: Kyle, Murphy, Ryan, Roland, Cloudroth and Ultimus. Cloud is also in an RP.

 

That was brilliant. Your characters are so cool and the action is gripping. I wait excitedly for the next chapter. :D

 

Wow! Your story is great so far! I can't wait until the next chapter! It is a little fast-pased, though. Hate and luv the cliffhangers at the same time! :)

 

Demon Slayer chapter 6!

After much thought I bring you:

Demon Slayer chapter 6

The cage that held Kyle and Tina melted. "Who are you?" asked Kyle. "My name is Cloud Dumas, but you can call me Cloud!" said the new guy. "Okay Cloud," said Kyle, "why are you here?" "I came from the future to help you Kyle." said Cloud. He turned and saw Tina. "And who is this beautiful woman?" he asked, taking her hand and kissing it. Tina blushed and said "I'm Tina."
"So you came from the future to help me?" Kyle asked. Cloud nodded. "Well then it's time we headed to Great Britain." "Let me guess," Tina said, "one of your creations?" "Exactly." he said, getting on his motorcycle. Tina got on her broom and Cloud pulled out a hoverboard. They took off for Great Britain.
A couple days later they arrived. The place was overrun with lesser demons. They drew their swords and started killing them. A man with purple hair and a Z on his forhead appeared infront of them. He wore a red robe and held a sword. "Zor!" Kyle shouted. "Long time no see." said Zor, bowing.


Sorry it's so short!

 

Another brilliant chapter. Great Britain overrun. No one would notice where I live.

 

Demon Slayer chapter 7!

Here we go! Next chapter! Sorry it's so short. :(

Demon Slayer chapter 7

Zor stood up straight. He drew a sword and raised it above his head. Lesser demons appeared all around him. Zor pointed his sword toward Kyle, Cloud, and Tina. The demons attacked them. Tina blasted some of them with fire, Cloud shot some, but Kyle went after Zor. He attacked and Zor blocked. He gave an evil smile and Kyle was electrocuted. He went flying back into Cloud an Tina. Zor charged up an electric ball and threw it at them. Then out of nowhere, someone kicked it back at him.

 

I can't wait for the next chapter. You know how to keep the tension going. Good work. :)

 

Thanks! You didn't think it was too short?

 

The best writing isn't mechanical. You write what is suitable for that period. Don't feel forced to write 'minimum amounts'. Write as you feel the mood suits you.

 

Thanks, I will! :)

 

omg..thanks alot! I'm hooked on your story now! lol..

I love it..It's really great...​

 

Demon Slayer chapter 8!

Thanks! Now for chapter eight!

Demon Slayer chapter 8

Zor barely managed to dodge it. Who are you!?" he said. The guy turned to Kyle and the others and said "Hey Kyle, long time no see." "Murphy!" Kyle said, shocked. It was his best friend, Kyle Murphy. He wore a black changbao shirt, black shoes, and black pants. He had a black headband, black belt, and glasses. His eyes were light green, his hair was black.
Murphy turned to Zor and pulled out a pair of nunchucks. Zor slashed down and Murphy blocked it and grabbed the sword with his nunchucks. He punched Zor in the face. Zor went flying back and crashed into a wall. He got up slowly and threw a lightning ball at him. Murphy spun around and knocked it back at him. It hit Zor in the chest and he turned to dust.

Kyle Murphy is a real person. He is my best friend.

 

That was great. I like that you brought in a real person as a new character. Well done. :)

 

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Very nice story, I like it ^^