Death

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  1. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    DEATH by Sora Lexa

    death
    it hurts to watch their last second
    it hurts to see them die
    watching them go into heaven
    its so hard to say "good-bye"
    walking through the madness
    the thought kills your soul
    walking through hatred
    through sadness
    through...death
    but there is hope for them
    for you
    and for me
    its not hard
    just hope
    dont die

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    howd u like it?
     
  2. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    That's a really lovely poem. It shows you should never give up. Hope is important and you've captured that well. Keep writing. :)
     
  3. Kiryu Setsuna F. Seiei

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    Wow..that was beautiful. Wow. I'm speachless.
     
  4. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    That was...deep.....

    *snaps fingers*

    Beautiful!
     
  5. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    thank u!^^
     
  6. twilit_shadow King's Apprentice

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    Nice!! I really like it. Hope is a quality a lot of us fail to see. We don't want to make it our last resort when it comes to this sort of situation. Very well presented.
     
  7. Nice. I like it. Makes me feel like... Writing a poem.
     
  8. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    if anyone wants a poem written,i can ^^
     
  9. Rosey Chaser

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    Here's just a poem i have in respons to yours, I foster Kittens and these two died, one in the cratte and the other one in my arms, my parents werent home at the time and i still feel like mabye i could have saved them..........

    I felt you paws touch mine,

    I had to say goodbye,

    I knew you were sick,

    This is the best way for you to die,

    Your tiny body in my hands,

    Your orange fur wisped away,

    Your brother was dead already,

    It was your time to pay,

    The sickness engulfed you,

    It took the twinkle in your eyes,

    As your nose touched mine,

    My face said the goodbye,

    You closed your eyes so softly,

    Your breathing stopped steadily,

    Your body turned cold in my hands,

    Your paw still reaching out for me
     
  10. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    wow, thats harsh,im sorry about your cats,do have any others?
     
  11. Rosey Chaser

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    Ya, right now we have three, chole, gracie, and garfield and they can fit in your hands. they r so cute!:D