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  1. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Tears fall from the sky
    My tears fall from my eyes
    Take me away
    Let me free
    Don't leave me

    Standing here in the cold
    I scream to you
    Am I invisible
    Why can't you care for me
    I gave you all my love

    I held onto my broken heart
    The sun left my eyes
    The stars left to another sky
    So confuse I run
    Run from my fear

    The fear of another lie
    Coming from those sweet lips
    My wound can't heal
    I see you standing here
    When I stare into your eyes

    Your dead and afraid
    I hold onto you
    Please let me go
    To this place called heaven
    You smile

    That bright smile is back
    Thank you my love
    My soul is in your heart
    Don't try to bring me back
    I will only suffer

    Follow your heart
    Let them go

    Even if it means you die
    Die from the pain


    A poem I made that came from a movie I just watched ^^

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  2. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Thanks again ^^ Its really about like someone dying and the other person doesn't want to let them go.But the dying person is wanting to go so he/she would be at peace ^^ yea i just watched this sad movie but I didn't catch the title
     
  3. Destined Working for WDW

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    Just out of curiousity, what movie inspired you to write this?
     
  4. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I don't know :sweatdrop: It was on stars.It was about this guy taking care of one of his friends daughter cuz he died in the vietnam war.Then she sets off a trap in a forest and dies.He then falls into depression.He then goes to washington D.c and goes to the memorial and visits his friends grave
     
  5. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Its really sad though and thank you again for the comments.More are coming i think