Day and Night

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  1. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    When the sun rises
    every morning I smile
    Because I know
    that it symbolizes
    the start of a new day

    When the sun is up
    they means that
    Earth is filled with light.
    His translucent glow
    shines on this barren planet,
    bringing it life and warmth.

    But then the time comes
    where the sun must set
    taking it's warmpth with it.
    Then the moon will rise
    shining for all to see

    It's pale glow will
    shine through our windows
    bringing the feeling of
    nothingness with it

    The moment the sun sets
    the moon will come out
    and even through it's glow,
    the darkness will show.

    The burning feeling of light fades
    and the comforting feeling
    of darkness will be revealed
    bringing terror to people of the light

    But even this feeling must die
    for the moon, too must also set.
    soon it will fall below the horizon,
    leaving nothing behind.

    And once again the sun will rise
    bringing it's burning light
    to the people of this planet.
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    this one doesn't really have a meaning... it just talks about how the sun rises bringing light that burns too brightly, while the moon brings a comfortable light that glows within the darkness... :)
     
  2. Trace000222 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    awesome poem destiny,10/10:D
     
  3. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Wow...it's great. :) Although you accidentally misspelled 'warmth'...anyway, great job! I loved it!! :glomp:
     
  4. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    thanks guys! i am thinking of writing another poem... but 5 might just be enough... :sweatdrop:
     
  5. Trace000222 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    lol,i think so.....i gtg go so.....bye!
     
  6. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    no... i'm gonna write another one... :) bye!
     
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