Dark Hearts of KH-Vids

Just as great and interesting as the other chapters ^_^

Plus I really like how you keep all the chapters on the front page, it makes it alot easyer to find the one you want to read.

 

i looooove it
it relates to real life!

 

Thanks kikame. :)

Thanks. :)

edit: Chapter 6 is now out.

 

That's a bit scary that Stealth guy...

Anyways like always, great chapter and I can't wait till the next one.

 

Yeah, he was supposed to be kinda like that. Thank you for posting kikame. :)

 

Ooooh that Stealth is a meanie xDD

Hooray for another good chapter ^^ I really like how this is turning out :)​

 

Thank you Catch the Rain. :)

edit: Chapter 7 is out.

 

I can actually visualise the events as they happen ^^ and oooh that Whiplasher is an even bigger meanie! Being mean to us all like that xDDD

:)​

 

Thanks for posting. :)

 

Same ^_^ I can see the stuff as it's happening too. Once again, another awesome chapter burnitup. :)

Although I find it a little bit odd none of the people on the mission are phased by having to shoot people and seeing them die right infront of them...

 

Thanks. And I see you're point.

edit: Chapter 8 is out.

 

>_< that sounds like me being careless and running ahead...ouch, I can't imagine how much that would hurt...

Good chapter, I wonder if I'm going to be left behind cuz I can't keep up? can't wait for the next chapter ^_^

 

I'm glad you like it. :)

 

i want the briefcase >.<

carry on going! i still want that briefcase! XD

 

Okay. *fillers*

 

>: D


I showed him! lol *hugs weapons*


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lol Poor Kikame! ​

 

I'm glad you liked it. :)

edit: Chapter 9 is out. :)

 

For we are the Kids of KHV, fear us and our guns xDDDDD


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lol we appear to be kicking *** in this story ^^

:)​

 

I'm glad you like it. :)

 

Cool new chapter ^_^ Looks like we're almost there. D: But I'm slowing everyone down.

I only saw two or three spelling/punctuation mistakes but they aren't very noticeable.

Can't wait till the next chapter ^_^