Dark Hearts of KH-Vids

okay dokay!! keep up the good work... *think of something evil* sorry got to snipe some more of my family, XD.

 

Okay then.

 

Lol. I wanna die :3

Anywho, I just thought of something else. With your charactors, your transitioning to much. Your hopping around with all these different charactors saying stuff, but we dont know who those Charactors are, what they look like, etc. Might want to work on that as well as what I posted above.

 

Oh, okay. I'll try and work on it.

 

Dude you knowI think it rocks already :) I don't mind what you do as long as you keep writing >:3


:) ​

 

Okay. :) *fillers*

edit: Chapter 3 is out. And I was told I couldn't use drunks in my story so I edit it alittle.

 

I liked the 3rd chapter ^^ the idea of a flashback worked well :) except I wasn't there this time D:


LOL anywayz good as ever ^^​

 

Thanks. But it is in parts so you might be in the next part. :)

 

How did I turn out to be a waitress? lol, oh well.

Nice second chapter, I think the flashback was a good idea.

XD "Giant Lizard Sighted off the Coast of Japan"
Godzilla, right?

 

Thanks kikame. :)

edit: Chapter 4 is now out.

 

OMG THAT CHAPTER WAS AWESOME!

Lol Awwww my room mates xDDDDDDDDDD


I sounded very grrrrr ^^ excellent work xDDDDD​

 

Thank you. :)

 

D: Somebody hurt Catch The Rain?! RAWR! *goes on rampage and kicks a pillow around*

Nice chapter, the flashbacks are interesting.

 

Thanks kikame. Glad you liked it. :)

 

good chapter, carry on writing!! :)

 

Okay, thanks. :)

edit: Chapter 5 is now out.

 

I am still very very impressed with how this is going ^^ awesome as the other chapters ^^​

 

Thanks Catch the Rain. :)

 

Wow it's pretty good

I like it

 

Thanks. :) *fillers*