Dark Hearts of KH-Vids III: Final Wars

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  1. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    To bad it's so short... oh well, I very much enjoyed this part:

     
  2. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    Thanks, I am glad you like it.
     
  3. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    I can't quite explain why, but this section here really made me think, more proof of your growing capabilities as a writer, keep up the work dude, I have fallen in love with your use of language.
     
  4. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    I'm glad you liked it. :)

    edit: Chapter 14 is now out.
     
  5. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    Interesting chapter, but I don't really get that whole dark 'true assassin' teaching place thingy.
     
  6. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    Well remember they are part of an organiztion of assassins, so they needed a start, you know. But I'm glad you like it.

    edit: Chapter 15 is now out.
     
  7. Yukai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Read the last 5 chapters (which should constitute as one lulz) in one fell swoop.Whooo! We about to see some fireworks here folks!
     
  8. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    I'm glad you liked it.
     
  9. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    *starts laughing uncontrolably* I just noticed something funny :3

    But regardless, interesting chapter, again pretty short but that's alright. *gasp* you brought back Burnitdown again? Say hi to him for me XD
     
  10. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    I'm glad you liked it.
     
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    oh gosh that made my head hurt.
     
  12. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    Why? Was it too complex? Too long?
     
  13. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Burntidown cameback <3

    awesomeness, dude, I am assuming writer's block because of the length xD but other than that I liked it.
     
  14. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    I'm really glad you liked it. :)

    edit: The final chapter is now out, with out the credits sadly...
     
  15. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Nice ending to the series dearie <3

    I did think it was a little rushed, but it was nicely done.

    I have liked this trilogy (: you have improved a hella lot as it has progressed, I am proud of you.
     
  16. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    Thank you! And I kinda ran out of ideas. but thank you. :)
     
  17. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    *gasp* BAD KITTY! you're not spost to talk on a cell phone on a plane....I think.
     
  18. burnitup Still the Best 1973

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    Err...I'm glad you liked it.