Dark Hearts of KH-Vids III: Final Wars

Sorry, it took me so long to read it, I kept forgetting. *headdesks*

Anyone, again, this is awesome, and very entertaining. Keep at it! ^^​

 

Okay, thanks. :)

 

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I loved the idea the introduction of the ghosts, it worked very well, and it was nice to have a different chapter that wasn't just focused on violence and fighting. That to me shows a real development within your creative style and plot development. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work xD​

 

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :)

Oh! Chapter 10 is out.

 

..dude, I think that is my favourite chapter so far. The ending was surprisingly hmm beautiful is the only way I can think to describe it. The different views and the contrast between a beautiful paradise and the war torn world of reality. Use of imagary is very controlled in this chapter and your use of dialogue has alos improved in this 3rd story.

Nice to see Snipe again xD ​

 

I'm glad you liked it! :)

 

Ditto, the ending was very...interesting *doesn't know how to describe it* great chapter and Catch the Rain is right, you have improved alot since you started this series

 

Thanks. :) *fillers*

 

And Snipe makes a return!

=3 Good job, dude!

 

Thank you. :)

edit: Chapter 11 is now out...and it is short.

 

Short but sweet, I feel bad for Catch The Pain but she seems happy.

 

I'm glad you liked it.

 

Yea, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

 

I hope it will be out soon.

 

I agree with that. =3

 

I'm glad you liked it.

 

Ooh, another intriguing part of the story...I'm really enjoying these, please continue! ^^​

 

I'm glad you liked it.

edit: Chapter 12 is now out.

 

Another short one but good none the less, you really have gotten alot better at describing things like how that L person looked, it brings alot to the story. ^_^

 

Thank you. :)

edit: Chapter 13 is now out.