Dark Hearts of KH-Vids III: Final Wars

Cyborgs can grow wings? O_o COOL!

:O finally Kiryu comes back into the story, cant wait to see what's next. ^_^

 

I'm glad you like it! :)

 

Ooh, another intriguing addition to the story!! Keep it up!! :)​

 

Thank you. :)

 

=P Lulz. That was good.

I giggled when it was all "I'm the last Dark Lord on the planet" XD (Wait. That wasn't the line... Whatever. You get my drift.)

Gaspit. Kiryu came back =D

 

I'm glad you liked it. :)

edit: Chapter 6 is now out.

 

Is it just me or does Kiryu seem cooler in this, even more so than the last two stories?

 

He is cooler. :)

 

Ooh, I really like how the story's progressing...each one really absorbing you...great job! :)​

 

I'm glad you like it. :)

edit: Chapter 7 is now out.

 

2 chapters read~

Chapter 6: I love how Kiryu settled back into the role of hero xD it is like he never had any time away :P I liked the pace, it was quite fast which reflected the fact that it is chaos.


Chapter 7: I found this chapter a little short but I still liked it. I especially like how Swordser was beaten, looks like the villains need some stronger fighters 8D​

 

Thanks. Chapter 7 was short because I ran out of ideas.

 

*jawdrop* Kiryu threw a 12 year old down a sewer?! oh wait, it's just swordser2...YAY!!!

 

I was going to have Crab People tear Swordser2 apart in the sewer but I didn't put that in for mutiple reasons.

 

Yea, well this way the readers can think of whatever they want her fate to be >:D

 

True. *fillers*

edit: Chapters 8 & 9 are now out.

 

Chapter 8:
Assassins, hmm... I wonder how this will turn out. Interesting chapter.

Chapter 9:
A bit strange, not sure how to put it.

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Now I want to draw a picture of this other person called Kiryu as a kid in the middle of the street O_o

 

Chapter 8: I play way to much Assassin's Creed.

Chapter 9: I didn't want my whole story to be about some war, I wanted it to have some life lissions too.

 

Me too!! ._o;;;

Like... Gasp! We kill people and we don't know it!

 

I'm glad you liked. :)