Dark Hearts of KH-Vids 2: The Requiem

I wanted you to seem cool. I think I did well in that department.

edit: Chapter 9 is now out.

 

lol, nice end of the chapter, she just breaks his arm and leaves.

 

i know it's very funny.

 

I laughed so hard at that 0_0 just her coolness is awesome :)


I am so sorry that your writer's block is still playing you up ^^ maybe take a break after this story to build up your creativity energy ^^

Nice chapter :)​

 

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. And yes the writer's block I hate it.

 

It is a good story, better structure and more details. Keep up the good work.

 

I'm glad you liked it Kiryu. :)

 

Ooh, you did a great job again~!! And I'm finding it very humorous. But you're doing much better with the grammar and such...although it could still a little bit more imrpovement, overall, it's awesome! :) Although in the sentence of "it's easy and sort," I didn't quite understand what that meant..."sort of" or like, some other word...?

 

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

edit: Chapter 10 is out.

 

xD lol GX died rather easily :P


I wonder it CtP died, whether CtR would feel it at all?


I am glad your writers block is slowly going now xD​

 

Yes, I thought it was funny too.


Who knows....well i do but i'm not tellin'.


Yes. And thank God it is.

 

Great job as usual! Of course, don't forget to add the comma at the end of the dialogue, but otherwise, you did awesome. :) I can't wait to see what happens next...and it's a good thing your writer's block is going away! Did my suggestions help at all? xD

 

I'm glad you liked it. And yes some of your suggestions did help.

edit: Chapter 11 is now out.

 

That chapter was...surprisingly sad.

I liked that one a lot, and I like how it seems that CtP maybe wasn't so bad afterall :P


Good chapter ^^​

 

Thank you, i'm glad you liked it.

 

Another nice chapter...it was so sad when Catch the Pain was dying...anyhow, can't wait to see what happens next! XD :glomp:

 

I'm glad you liked it. :)

edit: Chapter 12 is now out!

 

That bit made me LOL so hard!

You can really see you are past the writer's block now, you have your flow back and the drama is back in your writing ^^

Nice work :)​

 

It's funny cause it's true.

Yep. :)

Thank you. :D

 

Interesting turn of events, such a sad ending for Catch The Pain, although maybe a bit more discription could be good.

uh oh, I guess they slept in a little late, but what is that
beta cannon thing anyway, is it going to space or something? *doesn't get it* cuz if Kiryu and Light are trying to stop it they would have one heck of a time once it reached the outer atmosheres, they wouldn't be used to the shortage of air and then their is space itself. also if theose hover things go the same speed then if it gets a head start I don't think they would make it in time...