Dark Hearts of KH-Vids 2: The Requiem

I'm glad you like it. :)

 

Ooh, another tantalizing chapter! *claps* As for the grammar and spelling, the same advice as earlier basically...

I love how the villain has forced a hero to be part of their villainous group, and I can just tell that something intriguing will happen later because of Catch The Rain. So, continue on! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

 

I'm glad you like it. :)

 

i like the new chapter keep it up man

 

Thanks thelightisgone123. :)

edit: Chapter 5 is out.

 

And the plot thinkens as there could be a possible traitor amoung the '13 great powers' :O

As always great chapter and keep writing!

 

I'm glad you like it, kikame. :)

 

Of course I like it. ^_^ there's murder, explosions, cool wepons, some funny parts and charecters I know.

 

Well, thank you. :)

 

You're very welcome.

 

Okay. *fillers*

 

0_0 what the hell is in that trunk?

Awesome chapter as usual xD so now all becomes clear why CtR is trapped there, the weird thing is, is that if that was real and I had been cloned, I would be the same, I wouldn't be able to tell her x_x

eeep only 2 days left o.o Go Kiryu! Go kiryu! ​

 

I'm glad you liked it.

 

Another great chapter! Of course, the same advice as earlier, and especially remember to use more word variations (particularly for 'said').

Anyhow, I love the how the story flowed, and the clone thing adds a nice element to it. And the line with the sister/clone thing was funny too. XD And I'm quite intrigued on what's in that trunk...a burnitup wrapped in bread covered with mustard sauce? lol Just kidding. xD

But anyway, can't wait for what happens next!

 

I'm glad you liked it.

edit: Chapter 6 is out.

 

Short but interesting none the less, I hope the next chapter somes out soon. :)

 

It would have been longer if I didn't run out ideas.

 

^^ even though this chapter was short it was till very good :noworries:

I wonder whether any of the dark ones will survive xD​

 

Thank you, i'm glad you like it.

 

Interesting...and the fact that another person dies really keeps me on my toes sort of. Although I would've preferred the death to be described just a little bit more, it's a great story - just ignore my little, Larxene-like comment there. xD

Anyhow, I can't wait to see what happens next! And it's alright - I run out of my ideas myself often. Although listening to music helps - just a suggestion! Anyway, keep it up! :)