Crying Rage

It's an empty feeling.
When your all alone.
When your heart is bleeding.
And burning with rage.
Making you into something evil.

Watch me lower down.
Watch my heart beat stop.
My body goes up in flames.
When you feel depressed.
And sad.

You turn on your friends.
Your family.
And everyone around you.
Then watch is left?
Just yourself.

All alone .
With no one.
Crying bloody tears.
You look out the window.
Look down and jump.

Watch your life pass threw your eyes.
You hit the ground.
You don't feel pain.
You don't feel the sadness.
You don't feel nothing at all.

The sadness.
Gone.
The pain.
Gone.
The sarrow.
Gone.

Your life.
Ended.
That's when you feel better.
The pain and Sarrow.
All gone.

You'll be better loved.
Since your gone.
Your soul lives freely.
And Senserly.
It's the end of the crying rage.

 

a bit creapy but good!

 

i was really in a bad mood yesterday wen i rote it

 

oh...just promice u rn't going to cumit suiside

 

im not i aint suidial

 

good! I've been down that path...not fun

 

Is good, or that I would say if I had emotions.

 

chaser come on stop it seriously

 

That's really sad...

I can relate to it.

 

wow, I love it!. I dunno why I just loved reading it, but I really think it's awsome!

 

thanks........

 

Damn that was good! but it was a little creppy

 

ZOMG THAT'S AMAZING!!!!! Promise me you aren't going to commit suiside!

 

i aint its just a poem i let me feelings out in a poem

 

Nice, although I think instead of 'Sarrow' you mean 'Sorrow' and as for 'senserly'...I'm not quite sure what word you're meaning to say. :sweatdrop: Anyhow...great job, it's like a song (well for you, it's a rap I'm assuming?) and I love it! :glomp:

 

lol probley lol thanks

 

I HATE MY BROTHER!!!

 

You should try considering other themes to work with.