Crimson Fate

This story is basied off my imagination,with romance and action please enjoy

______________________________Chapter 1
The rain hit her face like small kisses, the wind made her hair look like snake trying to slither away.

“Hey dinner!” A voice shouted

“Coming!” she replied as she grabbed her sword and walked back to camp

“Where have you been? A man in a gray suit of armor said as he took a bite out of his biscuit

“Outside I needed fresh air” She said as she grabbed a chair and sat beside the man.

“It’s poring rain and your outside getting air?”

“Yeah and?!” She sat there watching the men in the room eat there hot soup and biscuits.

“Your just like your brother, you know that?” The man said as he put down his bowl

“Dad duh you’ve told me a million times I know..god”

My brother pasted away when I was 13. He was the top ranking soldier here in the Crimson fate. That’s the name of our clan. We were once followers of the king, But he soon past away some time ago. My brother then took over and helped our fallen clan and worked hard to help put back the way it was.
My father love my brother so much, that’s when father took me and began to train me in the Crimson Knights. I worked hard just like my brother, but that night when he went out on a distress call he never came back.

Days flew by and nobody knew where he was. Father got worried and I panicked. Father sent out men and a week went by. They came back, covered in blood…my brothers blood. I was devastated, I cried almost every night for him.

“Hey Twi off to bed!” My dad said as I got out the chair

“Ok I’m off to bed then” I said as I left the great hall


- StarShine Kingdom-

“Like that, there you go.”

“Really? Like that?”

“Your doing great Kylin.”

“Hey brother?” Kylin said as he put down his training stick

“Yes dear brother?”


_________________ chapter two

- StarShine Kingdom-



Kylin Fate is my name, I’m the servant here at the Star Shine Kingdom. My brother Toya Fate is the Kingdom guard here and the Star Shine kingdom. I work Hard here with my brother and he trains me so that I can become one of the Kingdom guards with him one day.” Hey you boy other there!Come over here now!” I ran over

“Yes how may I help you?” SLAP “You do not address my that way Boy! WE CLEAR!! I knelled down before him and apologized.” That’s what I thought boy, now leave me.” Kylin got up and walk quietly towards Toya. ”Ok time for bed” Toya said as he grab Kylin’s arm and took him home.
“Are you ok Kylin?” Toya ran to the bathroom and grabbed a few ointment and Came back out “ Yeah I’m fine he didn’t slap me hard this time.” Well he’s just a-grrr” Toya always got mad went someone touched .” Well please just go off to bed then..” Kylin grabbed a cup of water and went to his room.


-Sky Kingdom-

Twi was outside early as the clouds were once again clearing out the sun.” And yet another rainy day..” She signed heavily. ”It’ll be like this for awhile” A voice said “ Yeah I know Kima it’s raining season.” I replied as he stud next to me still wearing his pjs. “ Well what do you want?” I said as he looked down at me. “ Your dad wanted me to look for you. Just wondering where you are I guess” I stud up and looked at him. “ Thanks I’ll go see him then.” I tired my sword to my side and walk to my dads tent

_________________________________- Chapter 3

“Hey dad Kima said you wanted to see me?” I said as I walked in and sat down next to my dad “Yes, I have a mission for you. “ Mission? I hardly ever get missions, Twi thought to herself. “A mission? What kind? What Am I after?” The last mission I went on was with brother…I wonder what I’ll be doing. “ We’ve received a letter from a Knight at the StarShine Kingdom. We’ve been in contact for some time now. We need more men, I’m sending you to retreat some new recruits. You up for it?”

“What’s new? A mission sounds fun right now, I’m up for it.” StarShine Kingdom is the place where I was saved from. Going back as a knight sounds fun, but sucks. I bet know one remembers me anyways.

“So when do I leave?” I asked as he packed a bag for me. “Tonight, is that alright?” Tonight? Ok this is weird. ”Sure I don’t see why not “

______________________________Chapter 4

Twi walked back outside once more and glanced around. “ I wonder if I will ever come back here…”
Twi stud there thinking about all the memories she had with her brother here at this kingdom. “What do you mean by that?” A man replied from behind her. “Kima how many times have I told you no-” She stopped. “Oh…heh sorry I thought you were someone else.”

A man wearing a silky white shirt that was half way buttoned up, with a pair of armor legging stud there looking at me with his palely green eyes. His white hair moved swiftly in the wind.

“Ack…ummmm…h-how may I help you?” Twi said as she jumped around to face the young man. His tanned skin gleamed off the lifeless sky. “I’m sorry my name is Robin. Robin Hyde, your father send me to escort you to the StarShine Kingdom.”

He looked a little older then she was. “ Well I don’t need a escort, I can do well on my own thank you.” Twi growled in his face, and walked back to her dad’s tent furiously. “You never told me I was having company.”

________________________________Chapter 5

Twi stud there clenching her fists together. “ I didn’t need to.” He replied quickly almost cutting off her sentence.

“I’ll be fine on my own” Twi never liked people. She always thinks they would get in her way. “God I’m not a little kid anymore dad”. Twi sat down thinking to herself. ”This is no joke Twi. Your life my be on the line here.” Her head lifted. “What do you mean? Why what’s happening? Dad your not telling me the truth, WHAT”S HAPPENING?!!” Jecht stud up angrily “You will do what your told and that FINAL!!” Twi tilted her head and looked into her father’s eye’s. They turned cold, a cold brown color. The color that came upon him, when they found my brother. “…I’ll be leaving now” Twi walked out of the tent and looked around.

The tents were all lit with light and laughter. The clouds rolled in quickly and it began to sprinkle. “So?” A familiar voice said. Twi didn’t budge, she just stud there letting the rain hit her. “So what?” She said as the man moved closer to her. “So are you ready?” She shoved her arm’s into her pockets and turned around “Not really. Why do you want to leave so bad, Robin?” Her eye’s were bright blue. She stud waiting for her answer.

 

Cool !!!:)

 

Interesting.... Oooo chapter 2!
Lol... XD More please

 

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It's mostly bout knights and stuff

 

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i liked it!!!!!

 

Hey that was really great :D i hope u keep on writtin it was gooood :D

 

I will it'll get better soon I don't want all the good stuff to go to waste yet

 

keep going, kool story!

 

I put up chapter two

 

Nic job really good job cant w8 till chapter 3 :D

 

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Chapter three mite be a bite boring

 

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I will thanks for your guys support

 

Hey chap 3 was good keep on writtin its gettin better n better :D

 

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Ooooo... interesting...

I have a feeling that something wills happen.. hehe ^_^