Could I get some help with something?

Just quickly...

I have this part in my story (No Fear) where one of my characters gets asked by this kid who's taking the mickey ''why's there a nest in your hair?'' (my character has black feathers in his hair). And I really can't think of a good comeback for it... Just wondering if anyone could give me a hand? I know it's my story and I should do it myself but... I really can't think of anything, I spent the whole past two days thinking and still have nothing.

 

You should say that he was attack by animals that has feathers! Like a Goose, or a Duck! =P

 

lol nah, they're sort of attached to his head... well, it's kinda hard 2 explain. He's sort of like a cross between a human and a crow... kind of

 

Um, he can say it's the latest style for his age of kids. O-o

Or get the kid confused and say it's normal for people to have feathers in their hair, the kid's just isn't normal. O_o

That's all I can think of, sorry. XP

 

OMG I GOT IT! say its a sleepover place for all the CHICKS!!!

 

....rofl that's a good one! :D

 

First of all, this is the wrong section.

Second, why can't he just explain that he is part crow?

 

Hang on a sec, Kryst. Are we talking about Lauri? Then um... why didn't you just ask me? I got a few, I know that guy as good as you do:


- ''The same reason you're asking; 'Cause I felt like having one''
- '''Cause I'm the only one cool enough to pull it off''
- ''Nests are in fashion now, didn't you know that?''


Come 'round Aero's tommorow for more ;) Oh, and for those who were unfortunate enough to not get the full story about Bird Boy, he's a part crow teenage kid with a sort of ''**** you, I am who I am and you can't change that'' kind of attitude. He's from Krystal's story ''No Fear'' which is about this girl that starts at a new school where she gets picked on, she then meets Lauri in the woods outside her house where he had crashed landed while flying (yes, he has wings. Good for him) and he basically goes to the girl's school with her and helps her fit in in a way... I dunno, that's basically it lol.

See? I have to do everything for you Kryst!!!! :D Well, hope I helped.

-Max.

 

Um, great, Max, thnx, sure... *cough*howthe****doyouknowLaurisowell???!!!*cough*

 

oh how bout

'why aren't you wearing a nest?
*walks away*

 

Well why not just let him to tell this other kid that he should take his head out of his butt so then he could see properly