Traditional Art Concept Group

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Jiku Neon, Dec 27, 2008.

  1. Jiku Neon Kingdom Keeper

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    Yeah, just kinda felt like drawing this out. Most of it is very sketchy and hard to definitely see, but I guess it's fine for a first try.

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  2. Scott Pilgrim Banned

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    Um....it definitely not your best work. I think the only good drawing i there is the second guy with the beanie. They just look a bit rough, but you have a god basic design to them.
     
  3. Vexen_Is_God Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Nice sketch! It will be usefull having such a good layout when you go to make a final version and the way you have placed them together is very pleasing to the eyes. I like the one to the far left the most. <3
     
  4. Jiku Neon Kingdom Keeper

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    Honestly, I can see why you don't like this and yet I can't really agree with your appraisal, mostly because what I do can hardly be classified as work but to a lesser extent because I like the book dude better.

    Someone I showed in real life told me the same thing. Almost exactly the same thing.
     
  5. Rissy Queen of the Clouds

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    Some it is not as detailed as others, but I like the guys in the glasses in the front. 8D He's sorta cool looking. 8DD
    If you maybe go back over in more detail, I'll like it more.
    But nice work, Jiku. :noworries:
     
  6. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    The beanie and the book person both look awesome! ^^ The rest seems a bit strange like teh far left guy's head seems too thin and the glasses guy seems to have bug eyes. XP But nice job. ^^
     
  7. Shuhbooty moon child

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    I like the beanie guy. x3

    But it's just a rough layout to my eyes, and it looks like a wonderful project to accomplish later on.
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    Lovely for just a sketch.
     
  8. Jiku Neon Kingdom Keeper

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    These people are supposed to be freaks, just some more so than others, as such the bug eyes and thin face are entirely intentional. I can see where things could be done better and more clearly within this scope though.

    I see. It's not really a personal thing really and it'll likely get scrapped in the end so this is about as far as it's likely to go.
     
  9. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    This is very good jiku.

    Except the guy in the beanie, his legs should be a bit more open.

    that's all really, the guy in the far left looks like vexen....

    I don't know why, but the style of the characters is awesome.
     
  10. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    Ah. Okay then. ^^