An era ago, I would walk the Earth, smiling at those who needed one and held all my pain inside myself. No one was suppose to see the darkness I hid. It all was meant to be buried deep in my heart and be forced out in due course. My darkness was to be mine only to bare and to create myself callus to the world's attack on my very soul. I lived for others to smile, but to create fake my own. Then her soul crossed into mine. Another heart, also nearly broken. The Voice spoke into my ear, "She is important, be haste, give her what your heart desires for". Obedient, I have her companionship. She saw the beast within my heart, but she accepted the broken soul to her life as a friend. T'was how it all became clear, the Voice's words. Our passing lives were similar in grief but we judged not, and saw the person inside the other. One day, the goddess sank into despair and my destiny with her was made clear. That day, she was more important than all else and she forever will be that to these eyes. If to only have her companionship forever, my dying heart would slowly heal. Even now, it does surprise me that she agreed to have my soul to keep. Now I know that Heaven does exist for true love does not simply end in death. In her eyes, I can see a solemn peace. There's only us and this is the spark of our life, a new era. Our broken pieces are made into one. We are one soul, one worth fighting to keep solid. Through sickness or worse, my eternal companionship is always her. In her heart, I gladly belong.
Oh wow, that was beuatiful! I could feel so much meaning and heart went into writing that, and do you know what I liked? It wasn't overly complicated with huge words that you have to slog through a dictionary to find, it was genuine and kind. I don't know loads about poetry and I don't see any immediate improvements, it was very well done, I get the feeling you described yourself well. <3 Loved it.
