Come On

Come on, don't feel so bad
Don't feel so down
The negativity is only a tad
Don't go along with it as if it's a fad
There's no need for a frown

Think of something joyful
Nothing dreary nor angry
Don't feel trapped in a lull
You know it's way too dull
So come on, tarry

Need an embrace or a kiss?
Or something other?
Just give me your list
And I'll fulfill that wish
So you can smile one after another

You know I love to see you happy
With your laughter flying high like a dove
I understand life isn't a cup of tea
But with your cheer, it's like a bright drapery
It warms the room with your love​

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Another one of my poems, for trying to cheer up some of my friends...​

 

OMG! This is soooo nice! I just know that friends of yours cheered up ^^

 

*thumb down* Sorry Nymph, it is not cheering me up. Idk for Chaser either since I just read his own poem.

 

thank you, though im still a bit down im better thanks to this

 

omg... any nightly depression that was just inside of me suddenly DISSAPPEARED!!! I LOVED IT!! XD XD great work! :P

 

Thanks everyone. :)

 

Good length....good rhyme....nice to see a change.....not saying I don't like your free verses.....also like the atmosphere of this one.....good job Nymph.....

 

Thanks, so glad you liked it. :)

 

I bet your friends are all happy and loving you right now becuase of this.

Nymph, you are such a damn good poem writer. I'm jealous.

I really liked the third stanza the best.

Great job.
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Good Poem Nymph, but I have to say I do think it is possibly the weakest I have ever seen from you. I am not meaning to sound harsh in any way, but it did feel as though your word choice was forced in some parts. Still a good poem, I just didn't like it as much as some of your other work.​