My heart It's aching It's filled with pain And suffering. I can't go on... Not like this. I need you now More than ever. I feel like crying... I feel like dying... But somehow I live To see another day. I don't know why I feel unappreciated, I just do. I want you here. I need you here Beside me. I'll hold you close I'll protect you forever Just please Come back to me.~
i'm sad now Destiny....this is good and it is charged with emotions. Nice flow and structure, third stanza is my favorite because thoughout the pain, there is hope.
aww... *hugs* Sorry... Don't be sad... <_> as I may have said before, I've been having alot of mood swings lately so my poetry my be a bit... depressing... >>
