Hey, first time posting here (in traditional art). So, what do you think? pic inspired by the song, "The Bird and the Worm" by The Used. Drawn at Pichu's World Oekaki. Yes, I know the ear is a bit big, and the hair flow is off.
Welcome to traditional art n_n' I like it a lot actually! It's really cute. You have a good mix of colors here; I'm seeing some light stuff at the bottom and it gets darker at the top. I like that! Is that a heart behind him? I like how it's kinda hard to see at first, but you can really tell what it is when you look at it. Nice little random specks throughout it too. Overall it's really nice IMO :)!
thank you ^^. the heart behind him is because the first line in the song is, "he wears his heart safety-pinned to his backpack".
It looks good so far. The only things I can see are perhaps making his head bigger to even out the proportions, and making his neck thinner. Also try making the eyes and facial features slightly darker so they stand out more. Otherwise you colored it well and everything blends together, keep up the good work ^^