Traditional Art CnC needed plz

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Doukuro, Aug 11, 2008.

  1. Doukuro Chaser

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    I got bored a week ago and yesterday so I made doddles. There's nothing special and mostly head shots cuz it was late at night and I get lazier at night time...Like midnight and such (Lazy me xD) And is it too much to ask for cnc on each one? There's only six.

    Oh and if anyone wants the reference just ask. (I would post them now but they're still uploading and I'll forget later)

    PS-My scanner made some lines lighter then they are to the point where you won't be able to see some. And click to make bigger


    Near: I drew this one for Demi cuz she wuv Near and she drew stuff for me
    http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x155/hitna3510/Drawn by me/Picture-2.jpg


    Matt: Not much to say ><
    http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x155/hitna3510/Drawn by me/Picture005-2.jpg


    Kimmy (No reference used) : An oc for a story that I'm working on... Chibi style. The bat/angel thing is what I normally draw under my username as a signature and I hate all of the empty space so I randomly drew stuff about her. She's based off of my sissy cuz I <3 her
    http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x155/hitna3510/Drawn by me/Picture004-1.jpg


    Naruto Chibis: I plan on drawing a lot more chibis... I dislike the Itachi but I failed misberly at Shino
    http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x155/hitna3510/Drawn by me/Picture002-1.jpg


    Cluminess: I drew a bambo border for this one but for some reason it won't show... Pandas are cute! (Sis fav animals is panda so yeah...I'm her slave ><)
    http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x155/hitna3510/Drawn by me/Picture001-2-1.jpg
     
  2. windblade King's Apprentice

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    I didn't know there were such things as Near fans... ///_o

    (haha most people i know hate him) ///_^'


    anyway, I wanted to say that I love the panda in the last one!! ///u^
     
  3. Cocohints "Up to now, the most discussed topic is global war

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    You want CnC? Good. >:3 Let's start then.

    Near: *I had a feeling it might be Demitryx who made you draw Near, heh

    I think you managed to give him that childish expression on his face he has in the Death Note manga/anime very well. Big eyes and the position of the hand will do that. Good good. For the arm I just mentioned, you may want to let the sleeves of the shirt/jacket/whatever-the-name-was-again hang on his hand rather than it being placed higher. Because what you did here will give the fabric of the clothe a very stiff expression, like for example how leather tends ot be. And the one Near uses should be of a very soft and comfy fabric. See the difference? Only logic explanation for it turning out like that would be if the top part of the hand can't be seen, like the thumb. It's something to keep in mind when you draw characters.

    Matt:

    The first thing I noticed was that there's too much space between his eyes. There's a nifty rule I once learned: when you add eyes to the head, imagine that one single eyeball separates the two real eyes. Imagine that as you draw, and it should turn out just about right. And glasses... they're hard to draw on a character imo. You did good, but don't forget the thingies that holds the glasses in place. I don't know what they're called, I'm sorry - the ones "attached" to the ears. Unless Matt uses glasses like Ozzy Osbourne, don't remember. ^.^;;

    Kimmy: Lol randomness ftw. X3

    The eyes turned out... weird. To me it seems that you made two left eyes rather than one left and one right - they look way too similiar, you know? For this drawing the face propotion is a smidge off, but you can fix that by the help of guidelines. *something I personally can't live without lol* If I were to suggest how to change it.. First you'll want to shrink the eye on the left so that it's at least the same size as the other eye. It might be smart to remember that objects that are further away will eventually become smaller, like this eye will start to become because it's a sideview instead of full frontal. Next, you'll want to move the other elements (other eye, mouth, nose) closer to avoid that huge space. And remember that the eyes won't look EXACTLY equal, if you make a mirrored version of the right eye it'll look better.

    Naruto stuff: The one on the top is my favourite - he looks pissed off, love it! XD

    For Itatchi, those lines around his nose, are they meant to be there? The lines gives this "elder lady" impression, please don't kill me. Which I don't think you intended for him. If you can, drop those lines.
    For Hinata, eyes again. Only this time each of the eyes gives out a different vibe, the left one is like happy/cheerful/normal while the right one is sweet/touching/generous looking. You should stick to just one expression, otherwise it'll end up giving a crazy drunk pirate look. ( I lack of a better example, cough ) If you intended for the eyes to look different, to create the lawl/amused/surprised look, that one's a little trickier to pull off. If that's the case, the right eye should look almost like it's forced to be closed ( eyebrows helps for eye effects, and they should just be there in the first place ) since that's what you would do in real life when closing only one eye.
    For Kiba I have nothing except for the space between the eyes, they can be adjusted. Just move the left eye closer to the other eye. Imo he ( she? I don't read Naruto, sorry for gender confusion ) turned out the best out of the three. My fav's still the top one, tho.

    Panda:

    Propotional wise, this was the best of the five drawings as it was the most accurate one. ALSO, it has an exciting angle, like you are looking from above rather than just infront. That's a good thing. :3 I have never seen ears twist into the center like that, but it.. works! That was a cute element to add. I actually can't see anything that could be done differently!
    Maybe make the face have a snout, but it's not needed for this particullar drawing if you ask me.


    To sum up - I would advice you to start using guidelines when you draw, because they will help to keep the bodyparts in their correct place. It'll also give you an idea on how to make the clothes shape itself on the limbs, like arms for example. The main thing you can practice more on is the placement of the elements on the face, mostly the eyes. You can always reshape the head itself to the face later. For the hair, try to be more loose and wild when you draw the hair. Even the stiffest of hairstyle will have some flow to it, so just go nuts when you make the strokes. :>

    Did this help you?
     
  4. Doukuro Chaser

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    Thanks coco. I'll make sure to keep that in mind the next time I draw.