Digital Art Climb in the back with your head in the clouds, and you're gone.

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Advent, Sep 12, 2009.

  1. Advent 【DRAGON BALLSY】

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    Yes, I couldn't resist milking the Beatles fad one last time with that title. Anyway...

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    CnC, por favor.
     
  2. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    I'm not digging the white/grayish brushing done on the right side. It seems too strong, leaving the stock with too much light. Try some strange smudging, and remove a bit of the "cloud"effect you're trying to give.

    The text placement...it's a bit too plain, but that's mainly my opinion on it. Overall, this is good.
     
  3. Rissy Queen of the Clouds

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    As Chevalier said, but I'd like to add that I don't really like the dot-ish background on it. It seems too... simply added. It's hard to explain.
    The text is, to be honest, horrid. The style is too stock-like, and the white makes it distracting.
    I actually liked the cloud effect to the right of her. I thought it was placed nicely.