Digital Art Clannad

V2:
I don't know I attempted something I have never tried before... Looks pretty good to me but meh


Cnc?

 

The background and stock are both too bright. Tone that down a bit so we can see the effects and whatnot in your background, plus having a focal point that's super bright is kinda painful on the eyes. It also needs more color since it's mostly white. I can see the flow you were getting at somewhat, and it's pretty good, but again, the brightness distracts from it. It's not bad, but adjust the brightness so we can actually see it.

 

Ok here's V2


V2:



I did a couple of adjustments