Ugh, I really don't like it. The stock... she looks really bad, for one thing. Then the stock isn't blended in much. I like the collage in the background, it looks really cool.
Blend that stock! xP And try and add some flow and lighting to this, to make it secks. There isn't mch depth....use the burn tool, sharpen tool, and the blur tool to spoof this up. (And the stock placement needs some work, too.)
