Chapter 1 of Destiny Island's High Schoolers

Destiny Island’s high schoolers

A New Beginning

“Wake up Sora!†his mother said. “It’s Time to get ready for school.†As soon as Sora heard his mother, he hopped out of bed. He was excited because this was his first day of actually going to a real school. He brushed his teeth, combed his hair, and put his school uniform on. As he was walking to the bus stop, he saw his best friend Kairi (&& secret crush). Kairi exclaimed,
“Oh my gosh Sora! It’s been such a long time.â€
Sora said, “Yea, it has.†They smiled and stared at each other for a pretty long time.

They saw the bus coming in the corner of their eyes so they finally looked away. Sora was so excited because he finally got to see Kairi again. Once they got on the bus, they sat beside each other. Kairi exclaimed, “Wow, so this is what a real bus is like.†Sora smiled. Behind his smile, he was very confused. Did Kairi like him like he liked her?? Once they were at Kodiak High School, Sora spotted Riku. He was very surprised to see him. He said he wasn’t going to go to high school. Kairi soon spotted Riku as well. They all were once again, united.
During the school day, all Sora could think about was Kairi.
Also, all Kairi could think about was Sora. Riku was in a different class than Sora & Kairi because he was in a higher grade.
“Now class remember, when you multiply, don’t forget to use 0’s for place holders,†said Mrs. Hampton. (10th grade Algebra 2).
The school bell rang, it was lunchtime. Sora && Kairi sat together, alone.
They hadn’t really made any friends yet. “So, what do you think about school?†asked Kairi. Sora answered, “Its okay I guess,†“What do you think of school?†Kairi thought for a moment. “Well its better since you’re in my class,†Kairi answered. Kairi really likes him && is trying her best not to blush. Sora looks at her in surprise. “Is she blushing?†he thought to himself. “Maybe she does like me.†The lunch bell rang so they ran back to class. Sora decided to write Kairi a letter letting her know how he really feels about her. This is what it said:

Kairi,

I know this may sound kind of awkward….but I can’t keep it in any longer.
I love you. Ever since I laid eyes on you, I just fell for you. I hope you feel the same way about me. I couldn’t keep my mind off you all day today. Well really hope that you like me too. If not that is okay. Well bye.

p.s. Write Back
Love,

Sora

After Sora had got done writing the note, he folded it up && passed it to her. She was very surprised. After she read it, she was the happiest girl in the world. She had a huge smile on her face && wrote him a note. This is what it said:

Sora,

It doesn’t sound awkward at all. I feel the same way about you too!
Im so glad you feel the same way. Well what are we going to do then? I guess we are boyfriend & girlfriend now. I am very happy.

p.s. I love you
Love,

Kairi <3

After Sora had read that he had an urge to go talk to Kairi.
The bell rang.
Sora & Kairi looked at each other && smiled. On the way to the next class, believe it or not, they held hands.
After school went out, they walked to the bus together again, holding hands. Once they were on the bus Sora asked, “Do you want to come to my house tonight? Mmom & dad are gone to Hawaii for their anniversary.â€
Kairi looked at him && said, “Of course.â€

 

That is such a sweet story and really well written. I hope you will carry on writing it as I want to know what happens next.:)

 

The story is good, but I have a few suggestions. First of all don't use the "&" button, write it out and everywhere you have "&" you have it double; like so: "&&." Also your story is very cute and pretty much well written, but it seems a bit fast paced. It sounds as if Sora hasn't been back long and he is already claiming is love for Kairi. Plus he seemed to worry about it and was nervous, but he wrote that note without much doubt. It all seemed a little too fast, but again it's just my opinion.

Anyways keep up the good work. =D

 

Hee hee. Sora and Kairi sitting in a tree. K-I-S-S-I-N-G! That would be funny if Riku and Tidus and all their friends were spying on them while they were kissing and sudennly popped out, scaring their pants off.

 

Whoo hoo! That's MY sisters story!

WOOT!


I agree...Don't use the & button...

I know you'll yell at me later!!!


Write the rest soon! and I'll over read it for you before you post it...

 

Thanks =]]

Thanks for the replies. =]]
Im going to take all of your guys advice.
the next chapter will be great!
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