Digital Art can someone tell me how this looks

it took me 15 mins to do this

 

The colors and such seem a little out of whack, and the text seems like it's a little too big.

Your picture itself looks like it was editted in Photobucket.

 

wut bout this one

 

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What exactly did you do to it? I don't think you drew, colored and put text on it in 15minutes, sir.

 

Again, the picture itself looks like nothing was done, and it's a bit big.

The color of the text is still different from the Hair Color, if that's what you're trying to match.

 

So uhm, you didn't draw these I take it? You added the colour? Or text? I can't give you a good comment without knowing for sure what it is you did.

 

I think he posted them here. Isn't it enough? xD

 

i recolored and added text

 

Well then, on a random note it'd be nice to know who it was that drew the lineart or where you found it. If you had claimed that the very drawings were yours that'd be arttheft and not a good thing you see. but as you haven't done such a thing I'll get on with what I was saying..

For the colours you added I'd say that the 2nd image looked better. It had this soft look to it that fitted with the shadings of the drawing. The hair needs that kind of softness because right now it is too different compared to the rest. If you work with layers that's easy to fix without ruining the rest.