Broken Chains: The Namine/Demyx Battle

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  1. TheOtherKeyblade Destiny Islands Resident

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    H'okay, I said I wasn't uploading any more of Broken Chains here, but I do want to grab new readers so here is a BIG sneak peek into one of the future chapters of my fic. xD So here it is. One of my pride and joys of this little ficcy. My Deymx and Namine battle. I always thought that these two Nobodies were always a little underestimated but it wasn't really planned they they end up fighting each other in the fic. It just sort of happened. Anywho- please read and hopefully go check out the rest of the Fanfic.

    Slight explination: The Organization is tired of playing games with Riku and waiting for Sora to wake up. As punishment for the Melodious Nocture they send him to retreive the sleeping Hero as the assorments of Dusks keep DiZ and the King busy. However, Namine get's there first, ready to protect Sora if need be.

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    Namine’s eyes narrowed as the black robed figure pushed his hood back, revealing a cheerful face, matched by equally cheerful bright eyes. He grinned at her, glanced up at the glass case behind her before cocking his head in thought. Namine clutched her hands to her chest as she tried to figure out how many minutes she could hold the other Nobody off until DiZ could get there… or Riku returned.

    The place where her heart should have been gave a dull throb. She decided not to hold her breath on that one.

    “Well, well, look who it is? If it isn’t the little artist…†He winked at her and Namine felt slightly patronized.

    “Demyx…†She replied tightly, her voice catching slightly. She narrowed her eyes more, “I’m not going to just let you have him.â€

    He sighed, shoulders slumping as he did so. He ruffled his odd hair cut and leaned to one side. “Oh come on, Namne. We both know I’m not the fighting type.â€

    “Neither am I.†Namine responded, just as tightly as before, “What to you want?â€

    Demyx didn’t answer for a moment, but merely began to pace to the right, a thoughtful look on his face. Namine felt tense, as if all the humidity in the room had been sucked dry. Suddenly it was very hard to swallow.

    “You know…†the black robed nobody paused, something akin to sadness in his strange blue eyes, “Axel left a few months ago. He came after Roxas too… but not for the same reasons. I think he thought he could save Roxas…â€He gave a sad chuckle, “Pretty stupid of him. Now Roxas has to do it as someone else. At least before he was still-â€

    Namine wondered what Demyx would do if he knew the red headed fire elemental has found his friend still separated from his other half… and now both worked for her. Well, worked in the loosest sense of the word. She decided now wasn’t the best time to bring that up. She let out a short breath,

    “Then why are you here?â€

    “We just want Roxas back…†Demyx looked up, his grin back, wider than before. “I miss my little buddy.â€

    “He’s not here!†Namine suddenly let out, her voice cracking as she did. It was too dry.

    Suddenly she realized that the water elemental was stealing all the moisture from the room. He was going to take Sora by force… She tried to ignore the fear pounding throughout her body as she continued,

    “Roxas couldn’t help me so I sent him away,†She half-lied, feeling more and more desperate. “So leave. Go find your Key of Destiny someplace else.â€

    Demyx looked slightly confused, staring up at the case and then back down to the young blonde.

    “So Sora-“

    “Is Sora.†Namine answered tightly, “Go look for Roxas someplace else.â€

    Demyx paused a moment more, staring up at Sora once again. Presently, his grin returned. Namine took a step back, feeling her bare shoulders press up against the glass case.

    "Hmm, maybe they did send the right guy..." He chuckled, as his hand shot upward and the sudden glow nearly blinded Namine. When she was able to see clearly, the blue sitar was already in Demyx's hands-

    "Ready for a little jam session, Namine?"

    Protect him, please.

    Namine narrowed her eyes, her own fingers twitching by her sides. Demyx stared in slightly surprise, as the darkness swirled there, slowly taking form. She felt some sort of grim satisfaction as the heavy feeling of metal in her small hands. She looked back up, her face somewhere between determined and angry. The metal links rattled in her hands-

    Chains.

    "Only if you are." She said darkly.

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    Link to the Rest of Broken Chains can be found in my Siggy.
     
  2. Fork These violent delights have violent ends

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    Didn't I tell you I'll check out your fan-fic :D.
    I likey....alot actually. This is really great.
    I'm surprised why there aren't people commenting...:confused:
    Lazy reviewers!*Threatens with fist*
    Ahem, anyway I'm looking forward on reading your next chapters.
     
  3. TheOtherKeyblade Destiny Islands Resident

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    Oh I know you will. XD
    Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

    I am kinda wondering why people don't comment either. :( I know it's not amazing but still. xP

    I still need to check out your new Story... O.O I is so excited.

    Well, Broken Chains is already up at FF-net. Link in Siggy. But I'll be posting up little tidbits like this as I go to catch new readers. Thanks for the sweet comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
     
  4. Soushirei 運命の欠片

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    ^^ Great style. I'm a particular fan of your work. I may invest time in the future to read your fic but for now I'm sort of occupied with finishing mine--as I have somewhat of an unwritten timeframe in which to finish it. =o

    For now, I will say that your narratives are always impressive. They're intimate and characteristically vivid. Always a pleasure to read your work.
     
  5. TheOtherKeyblade Destiny Islands Resident

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    xD Yeah. You really shouldn't mess with Nami. She'll mess you up. ::giggle::

    You always tend to boost my ego when I need it most. xD Thanks.

    I understand. Actually, I was reading your fic when I should have been paying attention in english. ;) Shh, don't tell anyone. I havn't gotten to the point where I can reveiw though... close though. xD

    Anyways thanks again. I'm glad you enjoyed it. When people read my stories I want them to be entertained. After all that's why you read, ne?