Bring Me Back

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Sexy Sheva, Feb 29, 2008.

  1. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    I know I've been gone a while
    and I wish I could come back
    Come back into your arms
    Come into your heart

    My heart is lonely
    Yours can help
    Your love
    Your hate

    What is it that I want?
    Do I want you to hate me?
    To stay away
    and never talk to me?

    Or to love me?
    To sing to me
    To breathe with me
    To kiss me

    Bring me back

    and never let go.
     
  2. Falling Star Gummi Ship Junkie

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    <3 it! I really liked the ending "Bring me back and never let go"!!! I didnt see any mistakes either. Great poem!
     
  3. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    Thank you Bunches :D
     
  4. Ravenyuki Traverse Town Homebody

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    I really liked this poem. Great job with the spelling! And the grammar!
     
  5. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    Thank you very much :D