Braig's Gift

- EDITED FOR PLAGIARISM -

 

That was awesome :) I loved it! Great job! :D

*claps*

 

This story is cool!! Very good work, but it seems that Xehanort wans't in a small "phase".. :D:D:D:D

 

I know,but I had to give it a little laughter of unexpectant pleasures.Anyways...if anybody wants to join my family,The Aprentice Family,you can.It is based off of this story.Enjoy!

 

Aw, I love this story. It totally makes me want to hug Dilan >3

 

Thank you Kexi.Yea I'm starting to like all of the org members now.Like your sig.I loves British dudes.I've met one at a band camp.His name was Joseph and is from London.He was so cool,but the wierd thing was that he liked our accents better than british.

 

I really like that one. It was a bit awkward at points but that's hardly a flaw. Well, that's all I got.

 

*edited* ........

 

Very Good. Keep it up.

 

This was incredible! =D

And so cute! ^-^

You definately have a lot of talent - 10 stars, hands down! ^-^

*huggles Braig*

 

Thanks Foxxie! Yea I wrote this story in the efforts of imagining what the somebodies did in the lab before they became nobodies themselves.It makes me wonder how they ended up being nobodies and what did they do while researching the workings of the heart?I'm fascinated how this story actually turned out.I'm often usually typing in Even's (Vexen's) point of view.Personally the most favorite character of my story would have to be Braig hands down.He's such a mess maker of his room and a paintball champion.He can be smart at some point,but eager and mischievious the next.Just a fantastic spark at what imagination can do to your attitude and your mind.^-^
PS- If anyone wants to read the first chapter of my new story,Braig's First Day.Here it is: http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=16002

~Kitsune~

 

I read this a long time ago, but I just did see it again and decided to comment on it. Well, now that I think about it, I think I commented on it somewhere else. Anyway...

That's one of the best stories I've ever read! The mental image of Xehanort climbing into bed with Even, of all people, while Braig was gone made me laugh. The whole story was so well put together and everything went so well. I love the end, by the way.

 

I just read it and I love your story! The ending was really well done. Actually you wrote each part really well! :)

Can't wait to read more of your stories! Keep writing! (please)

Where did you get the picture of the apprentices that is in your sig?

 

I cropped the sig from a picture I found.I can't remember where I found it though.The one that drew it loved my story and decided to draw them.

 

Someone drew that?!

Wow, wish I could draw that good...

 

OOC: Yeah I wish I could draw like that too.I'm still a beginner at both make-up characters and anime characters.I draw daily though to keep practicing since there is a contest in a week or two that I want to enter.It's called Animania Event in Suncoast at the Mall of Louisiana and it is held every month or so to help cosplayers,such as myself and others,feel welcomed and to show off your own costumes.I'm cosplaying this year as Demyx and Larxene for Mechacon which is a convention held in Lafayette,LA.It's really cool and this will be my second year.

 

Wow! Wish I could go, it sounds exciting! Too bad I live in Canada...

 

OOC: Wow! You live up there where all those big conventions are?I wish I could go up there,but it takes awhile to get there and I live down here so...
Well I'm glad you like the story and hopefully during my school year I'll get going on the next chapters.

 

You guys are all so damn lucky... ;~;

Down here in Georgia, there hasn't been a SINGLE convention since 2004!!! DX

*wants to go to one so frickin' badly, it hurts*

;~;

*drowns self pity in buckets of icecream*

 

lol, we have a couple every year just in the city I live in! Not sure about other places, though! :)