Digital Art Boredom Returns

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Feenie, Oct 23, 2011.

  1. Feenie Finny, Fin of the Feenie Fish

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    Indeed, boredom has struck me again.

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    I'm personally not too proud of them.
    CnC PL0X?
     
  2. Iskandar King of Conquerors

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    I like the 1st and 3rd ones. I like the first because the color is normal, and that background is really cool. It makes me think of broken glass. And I think that streak of light next to the sword is cool, but it might be in the wrong place.

    The third one is basically the same as the 1st, I just like that you added a shade of green to it, which makes it look really nice
     
  3. Daxa~ #stalker

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    Why Finny my dear,these are lovely <3

    I love the background,it looks really nice,and the type/text thingy at the side is oh so prettyful.
    Also,colours in it are lovely.
    Lovely lovely lovely.
    and I didnt even know fish could make graphic art
    Great work m'dear.
     
  4. Makaze Some kind of mercenary

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    It's not bad, I like it. But I don't like the excessive smudging on the left side of the render. It looks out of place because the rest of the signature is very clear and crisp, and the render does not look like it is blending into the background so much as being smudged over it. Kind of annoying.
     
  5. Feenie Finny, Fin of the Feenie Fish

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    Thanks!
    Thankies! I'm really not good with text placement at all, so hearing someone say that makes me happy-ish.
    And of course fish can make graphic art! Silly Danu
    Yeah, I see what you mean. I think my biggest problem with the smudging is that I left it far too late. Thank you kindly for pointing that out.
     
  6. Llave Superless Moderator

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    Hmm. I think out of all of these, the best one would have to be the first one. It doesn't seem to be as blurred as the second and third one, and the background seems a tad sharper. The composition is nice, not in the middle, but close enough to give it balance.

    The only thing I don't like is the text is blurred, it would look better if it wasn't or even if you moved it over to the right a tad.

    This is very cute, and looks good. You do have a nice style Feenie, I do hope to see more of your work. Keep it up!