Haven't made a tag in god knows how long (again). Stupid school exams. Anyways, I thought I'd do something that's actually not related to video games or anime. Something that's in real life. This is only a WIP so expect there to be errors. Also, I only want critique and suggestions. No comments.
It's actually pretty nice. I think some parts of the stock was smudged when it shouldn't have, specifically the left arm and parts of the right hand. Sharpen your render a bit more, and work on the blurring manually throughout your tag. Gradient maps and such too, color is important. The smudging is nice though, you could pick a more scattered brush to work the smudging in more. Not much else to say, just work on it, I'm willing to see the outcome =]