Black Rain

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  1. Graxe King's Apprentice

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    This is an idea I've had for a few months now. This isn't finished, as nothing really happens, and will be updated in this post.

    Comments are welcome.
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    Black Rain
    -Year One: Blooming-


    September 16

    My name's Travis Avron. A friend of mine gave me this journal. I asked what the point of this was and my friend just said to write in it and that no one was gonna look in it or anything. I mean, it is a journal after all.

    I don't what to put in here. Nothing really happened today other than it rained. But rain's rain, right? There's nothing more to it.

    September 23

    It's been two days since that incident a few years ago. I wasn't here when that happened. I was still living with my girlfriend back in the old apartment. The streets were emptier than usual today. I wonder what's going on?

    It's cloudy today. Looks like it's gonna rain again.

    September 29

    I haven't seen Rachel around lately. I called her twice the other day and she didn't pick up. Did something happen?

    October 2

    10:38 AM

    How long has it been since I moved here? Four months? I think it's four months. I used to know these kind of things. At least today's actually sunny for a change.

    7:22 PM

    The trees in the park were starting to change color. I still can't believe that autumn's already here. Time sure flies.

    October 9

    My friend came over again to see how I was. I asked about Rachel and all I got was that she was “doing fine.” If she was, then why hasn't she contacted me? It has been a year since we-

    Nevermind.

    October 14

    The moon's out tonight. It's full. I never noticed how beautiful it looks, just hanging there in the middle to the night sky...

    I'm so tired.

    October 17

    It started to rain again. And I was getting used to this nice weather too. Stuff like this never lasts. That's what I hate about life. Whenever I start enjoying something, it just gets taken away like that.

    October 18

    Did I mention that nothing ever happens here in the city? It's so goddamn boring around here.

    October 21

    I heard a funny thing today while I was taking a walk.

    These kids were talking about something called a “Keyblade.” Apparently, it's a giant key that's used like a sword. It also has the power to open any lock. I wonder if it can open electronic locks...'cause y'know, there's no keyhole anywhere to unlock it.

    It started to sprinkle when I got back.

    October 29

    My friend came over again today. It feels like I'm being checked on. When I asked about Rachel again, I got the same answer. My friend left after that. I'm worried that something happened.

    I don't think this rain's gonna let up after tomorrow. It's really puring out there.

    Night Before Halloween

    I decided to dress up for Halloween tomorrow. I've got Blooming on my mind now due to watching some videos of Fatal Frame 4 earlier this month. I can't get it out of my head. Nor can I decide on what to be tomorrow...

    A pile of muck? Or a big rock? Or

    Halloween

    everyone should
    BLOOM

    November 12

    I woke up in the hospital today. My friend visited me and gave back my journal. The doctors said I was found with it, but I don't ever remember taking it with me. I actually don't recall anything that happened since Halloween morning when I left my place. All that I can remember is that face. That one single face. It was blurred, like it was Blooming.

    It looked like Rachel.

    November 15

    They said I could leave since my condition lessened. I didn't even know I had a condition.

    My head hurts...

    Night of November 16

    the
    moon
    see the moon

    i need to​

    rain
    even if the​
    turns black

    November 20

    My friend came to see if I was feeling better. I honestly was. My head doesn't hurt as much anymore.

    For some reason, he seemed sad.

    Thanksgiving

    I should've known.
    I should've known, goddammit!

    Some Thanksgiving this was.

    Day After Thanksgiving

    Rachel's dead...

    You always wanted to Bloom, right?

    December 4

    The rain looks blacker than usual. Even the snow looks gray as it falls.
     
  2. Mvalentine King's Apprentice

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    Is this an actual journal your writing?
     
  3. Graxe King's Apprentice

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    No, it's not. Although, some parts of it are based on myself and what I'm thinking about.
     
  4. Mvalentine King's Apprentice

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    Ah well it seems good so far...You're starting it pretty layed back and uncaring, normal problems...I wanna see how your progress...My ettention is yours