Traditional Art Black Mage Yuna

I drew this for my friend on her birthday and put some good time into it. The only thing I don't like are the hands, which were cut off due to the scanneranyways. So I put up a seperate picture of them so you could see what they looked like. Please CnC, and I hope you guys like it :D

Black Mage Yuna

Yuna's hands...

 

Cute~

Alright, I'll give you a bit of critique.
First off, the way you pose your drawing shows the personality of a character. Yours right now says to... getting a picture taken for an ID card. >.< The only body language I get from her is her smile, and there needs to be much more body language. For example, if your character is bored, draw them with eyes half open, limp position ect.

Nice eyes, but I believe the right one could be lowered a tad. Also, I think her hands are a little to lower down.

VERY nice of the outfit. It look absolutely awesome!

Good job and keep drawing!

 

Thanks~!
I think I might do something more with her hands then so she doesn't look like she's posing for a passport xD Or I'll draw her yawning with her eyes half open and her hand going to cover her mouth before I give it to my friend.

 

Good job on the Black Mage drawing! It looks great!