Well It's kinda hard to tell. I think you were working on Math is that so? *purrs* Well it's really smudged I'll tell you that and that's bad. -_- Face features could be smoother around the curves. Eyes are very well done. Wrinkles are good. Overall, you did a good job. ^^ *purrs*
It doesn't qualify as math. ******s math if you finagle. Smudging was due to the left one being erased numerous times for various reasons and the opening and closing of the notebook its in, unavoidable basically. Faces aren't my thing but I'll keep that in mind. The one on the left looks kinda bad to me now but it really makes no difference what I think.
Well, considering your original style i will give you props, and you also get your folds right also. So i cant really say anything about that maybe you should do more head shots so you can work on the face a bit more, sorry if i could not help EDIT: looking at you 'black' version it looks a litttle too orginization 13-ish
I should and I will when school ends but for now I just ask you to bear with my current level. I totally understand where you're coming from but it's a little hard to do much with long a black coat, I'm going to change that later but I was more concerned with putting something there at all. Slovenliness is not cool. I do not really know what you're asking so I'll ask you to clarify in response.
