Digital Art Bioshock Big Daddy Sig

My first attempt at a sig with a lot of focus on smudging. CnC is greatly appreciated.

Without text:


With text:

 

Pretty good. Like it with text, though it seems too...bright, for such a character. Try darkening it, maybe making it dirty. Also, sharpen the Big Daddy. Making him blurry takes away from the focal point.

And this Big Daddy was abandoned D:

 

I don't like the white splotches much. Also the coloring doesn't seem right to me.

 

With Text seems much better
The color dose not go well together
Big Daddy looks too blurry in the middle
It makes him hard to see

:3​