Digital Art Better version of an ooold tag

oh i remember this one
nice touch ups

 

Floating head = no-no.

Work on that, and depth. Depth is way too sudden from the bottom of the tag to the middle of the tag.

And, again, where's Sora's body? :P

 

It has his shoulder and his wing.
So it's not just a head lol.
And how would I improve this "Depth"?

 

I think actually lightening up the foreground effects infront of his body might help. Since those make him look so floating headish.

 

Hmmm....
Thanks for the suggestion.
^_^
EDIT:

 

Well I didn't notice it before you mentioned something. Erase some of the effects, or something. Whatever you can do to make at least SOME of the body visible (at least obviously visible).

Depth? Sharpen/Blur. I'm sure you know how to use those by now. lol

EDIT: and as another suggestion, the light is extremely contrasted in your new version. The source is extremely bright, and the stock's face seems to have more of a glow-like reflection. Which is kind of weird. I would dim the light source... or bright the stock a little more (as long as it doesn't lower the quality).

 

O.k. Thanks Darkwatch.
Will edit with better someday....or in 30 mins.

 

Lol, I see a floating head.

Pretty effects, as always.

Not your best, though.