It's pretty good, but... The render doesn't really blend with the background, but there isn't really anything to blend with, so remember this. The background seems very abstract. It's basically red with heaps of shapes and lines, but that's pretty good. They need to blend with each other, again. The text doesn't really fit in. The font is cool, but Text effects would be good. All in all, Nice try. You should read more tutorials, otherwise, just mess around. No Hard feelings =]
