Beginning Of a Heartless-Prolog & Chapter 1

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Rosey, Apr 18, 2007.

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What do u think of the story so far?

Poll closed Apr 26, 2007.

  1. I LUFF IT!

    5 vote(s)
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  2. Its good

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  3. Okay

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  4. Not really

    0 vote(s)
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  5. U SUCK *kicks writter*

    1 vote(s)
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  1. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    lol, hmm...I know this is about kairi but maybe try going over to what's happeninn with Riku and Sora? just a thought...

    I post to much :sweat:
     
    Quiet Elegy, Aug 28, 2007
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  2. myoblivion King's Apprentice

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    OH, MY, GWOSH! Fantastic :P As always. I want more...MORE I SAY!
     
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  3. Rosey Chaser

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    >>

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    Thanks!
     
    Rosey, Aug 28, 2007
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  4. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    You should finish this, it's good ^_^
     
    Quiet Elegy, Aug 30, 2007
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  5. Rosey Chaser

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    Lol, and by that you mean not wait a month between posting chapters?
     
    Rosey, Aug 30, 2007
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  6. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    Yea, a month is just a tiny bit long to wait.You know, just a little bit.
     
    Quiet Elegy, Aug 30, 2007
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  7. Rosey Chaser

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    I actually already have the story planned out, im just to god dam lazy :/
     
    Rosey, Aug 30, 2007
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  8. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    Well, I'm quite lazy myself, I would be a hipocrite(sp?) to bug you about it.
     
    Quiet Elegy, Aug 30, 2007
    Quiet Elegy, Aug 30, 2007
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  9. saxoR_vs_aroS Hollow Bastion Committee

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    so would i, but ill bug you anyway.

    POST POST POST!
     
    saxoR_vs_aroS, Sep 1, 2007
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  10. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    *cough* ...so um... you gonna finish the next chapter soon? *puppy dog eyes* please?
     
    Quiet Elegy, Sep 2, 2007
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  11. Kairi_and_sora_forever Destiny Islands Resident

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    hey I just read your story all the way and I think its actually better than my story Of course mine is being written by 3 people but we write in paragraphs
     
    Kairi_and_sora_forever, Sep 4, 2007
    Kairi_and_sora_forever, Sep 4, 2007
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  12. saxoR_vs_aroS Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Its been a month. post now, or perish.
     
    saxoR_vs_aroS, Sep 9, 2007
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  13. Rax Traverse Town Homebody

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    postpostpost!!
     
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  14. Rosey Chaser

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    Im REEEAAALLLY Sorry guys, but I dont know if I can finish this story, or put up another chapter.

    I have WAYY to much homework for my own good ;-;

    Sorry.
     
    Rosey, Sep 9, 2007
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  15. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    i know whatchu mean
     
    JapAnimeFanatic, Sep 9, 2007
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  16. Kairi_and_sora_forever Destiny Islands Resident

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    well Fine I...Breath breath I'm sorry When I get Angry or Sad wich I am both right Now I lose my temper asnd that is not good You know wut...mmmm mmmm mmmmm mmmm mmmmmmm mmm" "Erin (my sister) Get your hand off my Mouth "NO your gonna get banned" "Will not PLEASE DONT" Alright I'm Sorry
     
    Kairi_and_sora_forever, Sep 10, 2007
    Kairi_and_sora_forever, Sep 10, 2007
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  17. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    It's alright, we understand.
     
    Quiet Elegy, Sep 10, 2007
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  18. Kairi_and_sora_forever Destiny Islands Resident

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    _I have written around 14 teen time scince you wrote last its th eweekend please take a half hr of your 42 hr Weekend to right some more in the story 6 days since your las tcomment I would die if one of the three of us didnt post for six days Please please right more I'm crazy for this story and When I like something I dont give up on it so ya Bye and Sorry if I sound a little rude.....
     
    Kairi_and_sora_forever, Sep 16, 2007
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  19. Kairi_and_sora_forever Destiny Islands Resident

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    Cmon Rosey I swear PLEASE RIGHT FRIGGEN MORE NOW OR SOON

    Whole month and a half I would die If we wenttat long without righting in my story.
     
    Kairi_and_sora_forever, Oct 23, 2007
    Kairi_and_sora_forever, Oct 23, 2007
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  20. Rosey Chaser

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    O__________________________________________O

    *hyperventilates*

    Sorry >< I had school, and then I made staff ><

    God, I forgot I was even writting this D:
    *gets shot*
     
    Rosey, Oct 23, 2007
    Rosey, Oct 23, 2007
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