Beginning Of a Heartless-Prolog & Chapter 1

Im sorry!

Community Service...more time than I thought...

And I wont have it at all in the next week, Ill be in California, I might work on it on the plane rides though. I'll post it when I get back, kay?

 

this has pretty much been abandoned hasnt it?
shame.... the best fanfiction ive read so far...

 

*cires*

IM SORRY!!!

I have brain block. I spent litterally an hour on the plane thinking of what to write, but NOTHING CAME!!!

 

uh.... um.... thats hard.
start with the i have to escape bit.

 

hm, brain block huh? why must the good writers always have brain block?!

 

^^

I finnally got my act together and Talked out my brain block with my brother. SO now the onlything stopping me from finishing this story is going to be my lazyness ^^

And Im sorry this is a horrible chapter. I took a freakin hour out of my life to write it.

And here it it.

BTW THE GIRL IS NOT NAMINE

CHAPTER 7 ( I thinks)

Dream
I looked around. I was back on beautiful destiny island. The sky was dark, and the stars lit up the night sky, and reflected on to the black water. Next to me was a younger version of me, short hair, big eyes, and ivory clothes, with purple bordering. She was staring at something. I followed her gaze. She stared into the blank sky, as blank as her, I mean my, eyes. I felt something burn on my skin, but it turned into a smoothing feeling. I looked at my younger self. Little stars were falling all around her. Her eyes lit up and she looked up at the stars falling all around her. She looked back out at the sky. Again, I followed the gaze, aching what I was about to see. I saw Sora’s face staring back at me, his grin from ear to ear, his soft hand reach out to me.

I turned around in a half circle, closing my eyes so that I was facing the huts on the island. I didn’t want to have to look at his face anymore. I didn’t want to see his bright ocean eyes, his cute spiky hair. I slowly opened my eyes. To my surprise, there was a young girl, she looked around the age of 13. He long, golden hair made puddles on the ground as it made contact with the sand. Her eyes matched her hair, they shined like golden medallion around her neck in the stars. She wore a loose white top with a short ivory skirt. She wore no shoes, only the sand under her feet. She raised her hand and waved, and then she vanished.

I plunged into a black abyss. I saw a light, and I reached toward it…

I landed back on the beach of Destiny Island. But this time It was a whole different scene. I wasn’t alone anymore. Sora was on one side of me, Riku on the other. We were all sitting on the hot sand, gazing off at the setting sun. The water was a faint glowing pink, and the clouds seem to be made of gold.

“Do you see the sunset Kairi?” I jumped. I hadn’t expected Sora to say something.

“Its beautiful…” The younger me whispered.

Riku put his hands behind his head and laid down. “Nothing will ever change…”

I could feel my eyes fill up with tears. Why would he say that? Its all because of him… I turned around, my eyes hovering the ground. That I’m here with her… I lifted my eyes. There was another boy, he looked about the girls age. He had short gray hair, but it had Raven strips in it, his eyes matched. He wore a Long Gray t-shirt, but he had on bleached cargo pants. He stiffed a smile and then disappeared as fast as he had come. I rubbed my eyes quickly. Was the sunset playing tricks on me?

I was quickly hurried into the black mass again. But this time it was different. I couldn’t move. All of my muscles and nerves had shut now.

“Xale!! What did you do that for!!”

“I didn’t do anything! You’re the one who did this!”
“I did nothing!” Then there was a great pause. “She can hear us cant she?”

“Atkei, I thought you knew that!”

“Well, I’m sorry! Ill just have to do something about that wont I!!!”

I slowly found my voice. “Who…who are you?” I saw a bright, golden flash and every thing went white.

“Just stay here. We'll be back in a moment.” I could hear small footsteps fade away. And I was powerless to stop them.

 

AHHH! I heart it :3 I like to write about dreams xD There fun. Your lucky people read your stories. KEEEPPPP ONNNN WRITTTIIIING my talented friend.

 

the first few chapters were the best by far, but this was really good!

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SSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPP!

 

that was really good =3 please continue!!!

 

I Can see where your coming from with that. The first few chatpters have alot of emotion in them, but dont worry. Its coming back to haunt joo. ^^

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP AND GGGGGGGGGGLLLLLLLLLLLLLLUUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

 

and FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNGGGGG PPPPPPPPPPAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNSSSSS!

yay for writers blocks 0.o

 

OMG

ITS CHAPTER 8!!!

*gasps*

I know, amazing.

Here it is!

Chapter 8

A warm beam shown lightly from a corner of the darkness. I slowly turned my head to look at the light. My eyes rested upon it and the beam intensified into a flash, and then into an aura of colors. I closed my eyes and took at deep breath in. My body floated over into the hues of red and purple with every color in-between. My legs curled into a ball, could feel the colors pass threw me. The reds were intense and angry, while the lightest blue made it feel like I could touch the ocean. I thought I could feel a tear running down my cheek. Then every color stopped dancing and I was thrust backwards out of the rainbow.

My back hit the wall first and then the heels of my feet. The impact threw me forward, causing my cheek to slap against the cool floor. Now my stomach was aching and I wanted to go lie in the warmth of the colors. I groaned and rolled over to my back shutting my eyes. There was this periodic pain in my forehead. I slapped my face and groaned. “Stop it…†I mumbled. The pain stopped. I slowly opened my eyes…and screamed.

Standing in front of me were the two people I had seen in my memories… the ones that were never there. The girl pressed her finger angrily to my chapped lips. “Be quiet!†She whispered at me. “We don’t want them to know we’re here!â€

The boy eyed my face sadly then turned to his pale sister. “She doesn’t remember us does she…â€

The girl’s eyes fell like daggers on the boy. She heaved her left leg up and squarely hit him in the stomach with her heel. He winced and heeled over with his arm clutching to her stomach. “Not...another…word.†She hissed. She turned to me and smiled brightly. “Don’t worry, we’re here to get you out!â€

I backed to the wall slowly. I inched my feet back, trying to keep my balance and not to show fear. My legs wobbled from my exhaust and worry. My foot turned in and I fell to the ground with a feeble cry. I tried to lift myself up but my arm turned to jelly, as I lay helpless on the cold stone floor.

The girl walked over to me and held out her small, delicate hand. “Don’t worry, we’re going to get Sora and Riku.â€

“No! Let them be! So happy and…†A streak of pain impaled me in the chest causing me to screech. I clenched my chest and pulled in, but the pain wouldn’t go away. Cold, envious tears burned my cheeks like the hot fires of hell. I rolled my head over to the other side to a void their gazes.

The girls voice was soft and soothing like a melody. “Ssssshhhh, that isn’t real. Just trust us on this!†She pleaded.

“No…that memory is real…I can feel it… everything has been a lie. Just one big fat lie!†I babbled on with out concern for anyone else. I curled up into a tight ball. “No one loves me, its always been Riku and Sora…always every single time!â€

The girl was going frantic. “Please Kairi, just listen to us! We kn-“

“NO!!!†I screamed. I clinched both fists and my whole body was shaking uncontrollably. “WHY SHOULD I LISTEN TO YOU!! YOUR PROBABLY HELPING THEM, WHY SHOULD I TRUST ANYONE!!!â€

“KAIRI!!!†The girl screamed. Her hair turned a vicious red color, and her all white outfit went from a heavenly aura, to a flaming attire. “GET A HOLD OF YOURSELF!!â€

“Shut up!†I spat out. “SHUT UP!!!†I lost all control of my body. My fingernails dug into my breasts avoiding the pain.

The boy looked at me nervously. His eyes turned purple. “Atkei, it’s happening.†His eyes flickered back between a baby blue and a plum hue.

The girl spun around. “What do you mean its happening?†She stormed. She stared at the boy. “We’re leaving.â€

“WE CANT JUST LEAVE HERE!!!â€

“WHAT I SAY GOES!! SHES TO WEAK ANYWAYS!!†She flicked her wrist and a swirling portal of crimson appeared. She raised her foot and kicked the boy into it. I could hear faint footsteps growing louder outside. The girl turned to me “We were never here got that? Not a word to anyone!†Before I could reply, she stormed into the portal.

The portal closed and the door opened. All I could hear as a sugar-coated voice cackling at me “Awww look! Da little itty Bitty Princess has cracked!†When she smiled daggers flew into every part of my body. Then everything crashed and went black.

CNC PORFAVOR!!

 

wow, just wow, that-was-AWSOMNESS!!!!!!!! i want to know what happens next!

 

Lol

*should make you wait another month just for the lulz*

 

“WE CANT JUST LEAVE HERE!!!â€

Did you happen to leave out the word "her" in this sentence? :/
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Wonderful chapter, Rosey. Chalkful of anger and resentment... goodie! :3

Just for the lulz...? Ha, you're almost as bad as me. xD

 

No, its actually suppost to be here. >> Though that would sound good too, lol.

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Kairi you must be influencing meh! 0.0

 

Oh Em Gee Oh Em Gee Oh Em Gee !!!!111oneoneone
its up! its its awesomeness-ness! :D

 

Lol, thanks =D

Here is a link to another story that I just wrote as well. Please go check it out!^^

http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?p=757374#post757374

 

Nuuuuuu! *wants to read more* I can't wait for the next chapter! this is awsome! *forses self to sit and wait for next chapter*

 

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*decides from this comment that she actually needs to start thinking what needs to happen next*