Beginning Of a Heartless-Prolog & Chapter 1

NAHYA~

No, no, no! Don't get me pondering. lawl
Now I'll be thinking about it the rest of the night.

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They are both deffiantly jealous of someone....

BUT IM NOT TELLING WHO!!!!

MUHAHAHAHAHA

Now you have to ponder 01_Kairi. I am sorry...

not really though! I LIKE THEORIES!!!!:D:D:D

 

Hmmmm... this is mah odd theory:
Aura jealous of KairixSora cause they really luv each other. Demnyx is a nobody so he can't luv. Kairi envies Aura for... uhhhh... hmmm... getting to Sora first?

Lawl. My brain is "phailing" at the moment.

 

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One of them is close. The other one....well i dont even know where you got it room

 

haha very good!I need more! please please don't take three months to right the next chapter XD

:D

 

Liked it, only you used the words "I" and "her" when referring to the same person I don't know if hat's the word processor, haste or something else(Not ruling out demonic possession). That seems to be the only thing that bugged me. Keep writing (I hope the next one will be out in under three months) and have a nice day and all that stuff.

 

Cool! Very cool!! This story is getting better and better!!! I can't wait to read more!!

 

Lol. At that what happened, was since I hadnt written it in so long, I forgot what person I was writing in it, so I started writting in 3rd when i shooould have been writting in 1st So I realized that half way through it and had to go back and change it all :p I thought i got all of them... o well

Thnak you. Ill try to make the next one faster and NOT have it take 3 months, lol

 

the last chapter wasn't your best, from a critical view. but keep it coming!

 

Yep I know.

When you havent written the story in 3 months its hard to get back into the momment....

 

I love it. Aura reminds me of someone I really hate.

 

Yes! That means Im must be doing something right If im reminding people of people that they hate!:D

 

I read it again xD
I want more! GIVE ME MORE!

 

Ummm...
Okay then?

*runs and hids in a trash can* IM SORRY I DONT HAVE MORE RIGHT NOW!! CONTACT ME IN 5 DAYS AND I WILL TELL YOU GIVE ME ANOTHER 3 DAYS!!! ]

Lets just say procrastination is coming to vist me soon and I have to get ready

 

kewlness!!!!!!!! i loved it! xP espesialy the part about Kairi getting mad because Aura kissed Sora xDDDDD please keep typing!!!!!*aplause*

 

thanks! I havent seen you on here in awhile (im losing it, I know) That was one of my favorite parts to write!

 

i havent been on cause i was on vacation and away from the computer, and i didnt know that Kairi could get that angry o.0

 

I'm the old AkuseruVIII FYI

So any forecasts on when this'll be continuing? I mean I'm fine with waiting for stuff, but I need to schedule it so I can read it and still have time for stomp box research and other activities I can't miss. So got anything. (FYI (This is not a subliminal message(It's superliminal) Look at me poll of the day.)

 

I know, Im just busy right now with a community service project, Ill try to have it out in the next week, so probaby another 3-5 days. Hopefully

 

hopefully...