Beginning Of a Heartless-Prolog & Chapter 1

Nice, mentos and diet coke. Zexy is cute *huggles* and im still debating about whither axel should come back........*gets mobbed by a hundred fan girls*

 

Debate? How can there be debate over bringing back the hawtest character? D:
*joins mob*

 

Im taking that as i should bring him back *Hides from fangirls*

 

Oh crap! Some bad s**t is going on here. I wonder if Kairi gets a dark jumpsuit like Riku. Oh well, I like it. I admire you for being able to write a good villain. Alas, I can only write for people who are just and good-ish. Those people are hard too kill. But I will anyways. *laughs evilly and shuts up about himself*

 

Thanks. I just base my villians of off people at school and then i get mad in my mind and it comes out in my writting! If i give Kairi a jumpsuit, then ill besure to give it lace like Rikus ;) ;) ;) . I might not kill anyone in this story..... *gets mobbed again by people who want Aura killed*

 

Oh really. I don't hate anyone, 'fraid it's not in my nature, although I do get annoyed easily and I have anger issues. Oh well, it's okay to kill Aura she's a b***h anyways.
Though at the end of mine everyone dies(yeah it's a tragedy) but it all has a purpose. *shakes off topicness off and ends post*

 

WOW!! This story is awsome!! Kairi + Darkness = PERFECT COMBINATION!!
I would like to see an image of her using her dark powers... Anyway, keep it up!! This story is awsome!!

 

I might do a picture, i dont know. *shrugs* Im still hesitant about bring axel back..........*get mobbed again*

 

Don't bring Axel back, at least not permanently, it takes away the meaning of his sacrifice. Also it just doesn't seem like he'd fit in anymore.
Sorry that's how I feel, can't change that.

To those who want Axel back-
Don't send death threats. That's not cool, and it's immature.

 

I dont really feel like he fits in the story too. But people tell me i should bring him back. *gets mobbed* I DONT GIVE IN THAT EASILY!!!!!! *Gets mobbed with pitchforks and torches*

 

Wow. Chapter 5 is good ^.^
Sorry it took me so long to read it. I didnt really understand when you said I just posted it....

 

I wonder what's happened. Nothings been posted for awhile... AerithRose is still here right? Oh well time will tell and possibly prodding. I've some research to do.*sneaks off*

 

>.>
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Yes im still alive.

Im just having a brain block. Like a 3 month brain block. Lmao.....
IM SORRY!!!!!

Does that mean Im being prodded to write more? *grumbles off to go find story notebook*

 

great so far, even though aura is a b*!**... god is she evil.

 

I was wondering when you'd be posting in here again...

Take your time, but I'm going to contradict myself by saying... please hurry!

=D

 

ITS DONE!!!!

I KNOW!!!
LIKE 3 MONTHS LATER.... lol

@ KingdomFan- of course shes B***** Why wouldnt she be :P

HERE IT IS!!!

CHAPTER 6

But first...I would like to give a special shoutout to myoblivion, for giving an idea to get over my 3 month brain block *hugs*

NOW HERE IT IS!!\

CHAPTER 6!!!

I felt all of her body loosen. My arms drooped down into the dark abyss. My head rolled back wards, and my legs fell down. I could feel her self-falling, but she couldn’t feel the air moving around me. Every so often, my hair would fly up into her face, but normally, it just stayed in one place, as if I was lying down. I could felt her mind wandering, but it was distant off, far beyond the darkness. My thoughts turned to Sora and his life less body. I felt extreme sad ness, but no tears formed at my blank eyes. I wanted them to come so badly, warm, salty water in a cold, brittle world. My whole body jerked and my head, legs, and arms suddenly hit a hard bottom. My back soon hit also. My mind slowly came back to me. Wait? I thought, There’s a bottom in the darkness????? My head rolled over to the right side. SORA!!! My mind screeched at me. “SORA!!!†Kairi screamed but it only came out as a muffle. I quickly thrust her self up ward. I have to save Sora! My forehead hit a cold metal thing. “OWWWW!!! WHAT THE HECK!!!!†I screamed in pain, but it still came out muffled.

I shook my head from side to side. What would a metal bar be doing in darkness???? AM I EVEN IN DARKNESS!?!?!!? Where’s Riku? Where’s Sora? O no, please not Sora… Don’t let him die… No Sora…. My head throbbed. The pain was getting sharper and more intense in my head, but all of the pain in my chest was gone. Not a single dagger of pain was left…

Small footsteps could be heard out of the room. The door creaked open, and then slammed shut. “Who…who are you?â€

“If it isn’t the little itty bitty princess? She’s wake!†It dripped with sarcasm. The person walked over and took a large cloth out of my mouth.

I gagged and then my nose wrinkled. “I’d rather be dead, then be with you Aura!!!†I tried to get up, but a rough surface was tied around my ankles and wrists.

I could tell a smile was creeping across Aura’s face. “Aw, thanks for the compliment, but I already get enough of those from my REAL Boyfriend. Not that pathetic excuse for a keyblade master. All he is, is a master of falling for tricks and lies!†She sneered.

I clenched her fists so hard, her long nails dug into her fleshy palm. “Don’t you say another bad thing about Sora!! He did nothing! Your just a b**** who will do anything for power!†My voice was quivering and breaking.

Aura raised her eyebrows. “Your not to be making the deals little princess. And don’t worry; your little keyblade Disaster is fine. So shut up and be a good little princess!â€

My mouth dropped. “He’s… okay? He’s cured?â€

Aura took of the black blindfold I had wrapped over my eyes. I cringed for to reasons. One, she touched me. Two, the light was bright. I took a quick glance at the room I was in. There was a metal bar right in front of me. To the left there was one rotting wooden chair, and to the right there was one oak book case, but it only had on book in it. The floor was a hard concrete, it was bitter cold. The walls were all pale gray stones, and the ceiling looked like it could cave in any minute. I narrowed my eyes. Go figure, I thought. I’m in a dungeon!

She looked right at me. “Your friend Riku is a smart boy yea know…†She walked around the room. “He knew either way someone was going to die. So, he decided, well…†She stopped pacing and grabbed my chin, and looked me in the eye. “That he would give me you for the cure. So now you are stuck here, with me, while your friends are happily playing on the island that you have lived on. I bet you, Sora is scratching out your picture on that cave wall and putting Riku’s.†She held head in triumph. “Does that make the sad whittle princess happy?†She smiled and raised both eyebrows once.

I eyes were blank. “So, he’s only okay because Riku picked him over me?â€

Aura nodded. “ YEP!!! DOESN’T THAT MAKE YOU HAPPY!!†She was absolutely giddy about the subject. She was beginning to really scare me.

I nodded once sadly. “I guess so… If it means Sora’s safe and happy…and if Riku’s happy…†Tears formed in my hollow eyes. “I hope they are okay…â€

“OF COURSE THEY ARE FINE!!!†Aura screamed. She shook her head and then her chest. She took her hands in front of her face and brought them down fast breathing once in and out. She formed a prayer with her hands in front of her stomach. She smiled. “ I NEVER go back on a trade… especially on one this good! Sora is nothing.†She looked at the wall. “And soon you will be too! Darkness! It will take you over!â€

I shook my head rapidly. “Have you forgotten, I’m a princess of heart! I don’t have any darkness in my heart!†I eyed her with my life.

“I beg to differ!†Aura looked as if she was having the time of her life. “You do have darkness in your heart. And lots of it. That’s why the deal is so good! If I control you, I control your darkness.†She twisted her hair. ‘It’s my special gift! If someone’s darkness is so strong that it forces its way out of its host, its mine to control. Why else do you think I wanted you? Your darkness is so strong!! Its like a feast to my heart!!!†She beat her eyelashes.

“I’m telling you, I HAVE NO DARKNESS!!!!†I shouted.

Aura rolled her eyes. “ARE YOU DEAF!!!! I JUST EXPLAINED IT!!! Have you felt a pain in your chest lately?â€

I shifted my feet. “Yes….â€

“My point exactly. By chest I mean heart. Its called envy. Another gift of mine! To make people envious of me. Your perfect little princess life has been perfect all the time, this is new to you! The 7 sins; lust, greed, gluttony, sloth, wrath, pride, and of course envy. Your life has been so la-de-da, this whole entire time, you have never experienced these. You’ve never had to have someone tell you that you were perfect! Everyone assumed you were! You have never felt greed, because you’ve always had everything! You never felt gluttony, because… well, that one I don’t know. Your not a sloth because your always playing with you precious friends! You’ve never been mad at someone, because everyone did what you wanted! Your don’t have pride, because no one asked you about it! And you’ve of course never felt envy because no one has ever challenged you! EXCEPT ME!!!†Now she was screeching. “YOU ALWAYS GOT WHAT YOU WANTED, EVERYTHINGS BEEN PERFECT, AND YOUR JUST A SPOILD LITTLE BRAT!! BECAUSE IT ISN’T ALWAYS GOING TO BE LIKE THIS LITTLE PRINCESS!!! BETTER GET USED TO IT NOW!!!†She fumed up. Her face was wrinkled up and looked at me at angrily. “EVERYTHINGS EVER BEEN ABOUT YOU!!! Now its time for the REST of us!!!†She screamed.

She stepped forward and slapped me on the right side on the face. I topped over unable to catch my balance. My head slapped on the concrete and hot tears filled my face to sooth the pain. I heard stomping a door slamming and the noise gradually grew to just me crying. The whole right side of my face from where I was slapped and my head pain was increasing from when I had topped to the ground. I quietly scooted over to the corner and curled up into a uncomfortable ball. Then I cried myself to sleep.

OOOOOOOO AURA ISH PISSED!!!!! :3

CnC Por Favor!!!

 

Hhahhahha! I Like It!!! More More!

 

Thankf you. And thanks you for the idea! *hugs*

 

Interesting... can't wait for the rest!
You had some grammatical errors that bugged me.

>:3
I think Aura tis jealous of Kairi, and Kairi obivisiously envies Aura. Ah what a tangled web we weave!

 

Yep, grammatical error *glares at word processor* excuse me for a mintue...

*goes and beats up word for not working* ISH ALL BETTER!!!

Aura is jealous....but it might not be of Kairi!!

And Kairi is jealous of someone, but it might not me Aura!!!

:3