Beginning Of a Heartless-Prolog & Chapter 1

Beginning Of a Heartless

Hi I'm beginning a new story and this is my first time so ANY comments are apprechated and if it stinks im sorry. Again, ANY comments are apprechated. Enjoy! (I hope. :D )

Prolog

It had always been the three of us. I had never wanted it to change. It was always Riku, Sora and I, and we had been best friends for as long as I could remember. We did EVERYTHING together. Wherever you would find one of us, you were sure to find the rest of us near by. We had gone swimming in the crystal clear ocean, looked for shells on the beach, and once even planned to go sailing off together to search and explore all the worlds around us. All of that changed when we were separated to different worlds. But even then we were all searching for each other, all wanting to see each other again. After two long adventures we found everyone and we all headed back to the islands.

Riku and Sora had always liked me. But now they like me more than ever (I think its just hormones). They fight over who will sit next to me, and whom they will share their cookie with and I have and always will like the flattery. When I’m alone in my room, I secretly wish that one of them would just say that they liked me and get it over with, but after 6 months of being on the island, they haven’t said anything. Then suddenly, someone else came and nothing was ever the same. A new person to be in our trio. A new GIRL.

Chapter 1

Destiny Islands
Her name was Aura. She was our age, around 16. She arrived on the island mysteriously, no parents only some clothes. We meet her the day after she moved on to the island. I was walking in-between Riku and Sora along the beach, occasionally splashing each other for the fun of it when she came running up. She came from the direction of the secret cave, one of the in my opinion, the creepiest place on the island. She long black hair wisped in the wind and her bare feet pounded on the grainy sand. She wore a small black mini skirt and a baby blue t-shirt that matched the ocean. She ran up to us and excitingly said " Hi, I'm Aura!!!!!"
Riku just stared at her hair, Sora just wasn’t speaking, and finally I picked up the courage to say, "Hi, I'm Kairi, this is Riku and this is Sora."
"So YOU'RE the brave heroic keyblade master!" She pushed me away from Sora so SHE was standing next to him. I feel over in the sand and landed on my elbow. HARD. I stayed now on the ground wincing and holding my right elbow.
Sora faced turned as bright red as my hair "Ya, I'm the Keyblade Master"
She turned to Riku "And you must be the master of darkness who came back to the light side. I'm SO glad that you helped Sora defeat Xemnas. It was SO brave of you."
Riku put his arms behind his head. "Ya that might have been me." He flash her a flawless smile that he always flashes at me. ME! NOT HER!
I was beginning to get mad. First, Riku had given her my smile, and second, no one had noticed I had stayed on the ground the whole entire time. And my arm was beginning to swell up to the size of a rock and was throbbing like heck.
“Hey Sora, Riku yesterday when I was exploring I found this REALLY cool thing that I would like to show you. Come on!†She grabbed their elbows and dashed off. Pulling Riku and Sora with her. She turned her head around looked me straight in the eye with her bright blue eyes and winked at me. SHE WINKED AT ME! Then she gave me one of those “ I would hate too be you right now†smiles and ran off with Riku and Sora.
I clenched my right fist. “OW!†I cried out in pain forgetting that my elbow REALLY, REALLY hurt. I could feel my heart pounding in and out of my chest as I picked myself up and stomped home.

The Black Room

“She’s doing a great job isn’t she†A deep voice said.
“The Princess is showing more anger than we though†A laugh echoed though out the room, “Who would have known she cared so much about them? They’re just boys after allâ€
“At this rate the plan should be ready for action in a few more days. I need you to go meet with our agent and tell her the new planâ€
“Yes master†The voices said in unison.
“Good. Soon we should be ready to attack the Islands.†He laughed. “Good show Aura, good show………â€

:D Teehee
Edit: Chapter 2 link http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10318
:)
Edit: Chapter 3 link http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10342

 

Ohhhh Yummy! I'm starting to hate this girl as much as Kairi is!!! She should kill her!!! She should murder her in her sleep!! >=D

Anyway, good job so far. And there seems to be a little plotting against someone in here... >=)

 

I wrote the next chapter last night, I probably post it tonight. I dont like Aura but she is SO MUCH FUN to write because she remindes me of someone at my school :p

 

Hey! I got an idea! Let's slap the boys, and beat them up because of their stupidity!

 

YES!!!! Ill have her do that in a chapter. Dont know which one but one of them! i'm gonna write chapter 2/3 probably during P.e (cant do anything cause of my injuries. take THAT educational system!) so ill have those up by tonigt. mabye she'll slap them in one of thoses chapter......:D

 

SCORE! Take pictures of the bruises on Sora and Riku for me, and e-mail them to me!
(if you are wondering, I am playing around. Sometimes, I joke like that, and people take me siriously . . .)

Darn educational system. Exspecailly US education system!
i hated middle school.

I'm going to be cheering for Kairi. "fight Fight Fight Fight fight fight FIGHT!!!!!

Yeah for size modifiers on this forum!

 

Ill say something and they'll look at me like im craxy (which im not going to argue with) I joke around with people alot :D I dont like middle school . Its one big soap opera SHE'S GONNA SLAP SOMEONE SOON!!!!!!!! *cough* Chapter 3 *cough*

 

Beginning Of a Heartless-Chapter 2

Hi people! This is chapter 2 and i hope you like it. Comments are greatly apprechated! :D

Edit: Do you people not like to post?

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I stormed off into my room. I slammed the door shut, the whole room shook. A picture of Riku, Sora and I crashed to the ground, the glass shattered like brittle ice. I angrily kicked it underneath my bed. I grabbed my fluffy Pink pillow that Sora had given me for my 10th birthday and cried myself to sleep.

*Dream*

“Come Kairi keep running!” Sora cried out.

“I can’t run anymore!” I yelled back. I fell to my knees and rolled on to my back. Riku and Sora came running back to me.

“Come on, we’ll help you!” Riku exclaimed. They grabbed my hands and pulled me up. Then together we ran into the ocean, splashing and kicking at the water. For a split second, my short red hair became long and black, my pale blue eyes turned a ocean blue and my smile turned to one of perfectness.

*End of dream*

I stood up with a gasp of fright. I looked to the Disney clock beside me. 8 o’clock. “They probably aren’t up yet. Those lazy bums.” I thought to myself with a chuckle. I looked over at the calendar. April 16. That date triggered something in my mind but I couldn’t remember what. I recalled the dream and replayed it in my mind. Suddenly I struck gold. “We were playing with our imaginations weren’t we?” I chuckled at the thought. They didn’t want me to be eaten by the evil creatures with purple bodies with yellow spots and green antennae and eyes. Sora had thought of the game. It all seemed so long ago. A small tear found its way down my cheek.

I flopped over my bed, sticking my head under. “OW” I shot back up. I had forgotten about my arm. It was still swollen and puffy. I sighed and looked under the bed again. I looked under and pulled out the photograph that had been shattered earlier. The photo was dated April 16. I stared at it blankly and a flood of memories came rushing back. “Happy Birthday Kairi” I whispered to myself.

I quickly got myself dressed and ran over to Sora’s house. I knocked on the door three times, my signature knock. “Hello Kairi” Sora’s mom answered the door. “Can I help you? And what happened too your arm?”

I looked down at it. It was as red as ever. “I fell on it……Uhhhh, Is Sora home?”

“He might be in his room” she replied. “Or he might be with Riku.” She sighed and shrugged her shoulders. “You just never know with him You can go up to his room and check if you like.”

“Ok, thanks.” I ran up to his room, skipping two steps at a time. I creaked open the door and walked inside. The bed was unmade and clothes were all over the floor. I noticed a small note sitting on the bed. I picked it up and skimmed though.

Dear Kairi,
Today we decided we would spend the day with Aura , showing her the Island and other stuff. We’ll meet you over at the tree house later.
Sora and Riku

My eyes filled up with tears. “They didn’t remember it was my birthday, did they…” My voice faded off as I choked on my tears. I plopped myself down on Sora’s messy bed. I wanted to see a picture of Riku, Sora, and me. He always had one on his dresser. But today there was none; instead there was a picture of Sora, Riku, and Aura taken yesterday.

My eyes couldn’t take it much longer. I rushed out of the room, slamming the door behind me, hoping the picture would fall and crash and I would never have to see it again.

I ran down the beach as fast as my legs could carry me. My eyes were like a big, black rain could ready to let the rain fall from the heavens. I looked out to the waves and bawled. And I don’t mean your “OMG, I broke a nail” petty crying. I mean full out bawling. After about 30 minutes of non-stop crying, I collected myself and rubbed my eyes. I thought going to the treehouse would be a good idea.

I walked over, praying that it was just Sora and Riku. I tiptoed over and hid behind a tree. Nope, there was defiantly a girl’s voice. Aura’s voice. I couldn’t hear what they were saying so I crept in closer. I peered in through a window and saw her sitting in-between Riku and Sora, both gazing at her. She said in her preppy voice, “So………” With her fingers she twirled her hair so it looked like a long black snake ready to strike.“ What do you guys think of Kairi.........................?”

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EVIL GIRl. I actually have written chapter 3, im still debatin about putting it up tonight or making u wait and posting it tommorow (MUHAHAHAHA)
Edit: Chap. 3!!!!!!! http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10342

 

OH MY GOSH SHE HAS TO BE IN MY STORY!!! AHHHA this is great ^.^ cant wait till you come up with more man.......for some reason maybe I should rewrite my things in first person too....it sounds better I dont know...anyway but sooooooo good I want to read more! xD

 

Beginning Of a Heartless-Chapter 3

WOOT!! Chapter 3 is up!!!!!!!!!!! Tell me what you think so i can make the story better! :D

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My eyes grew wide and my mouth dropped a few inches. She blinked and smiled innocently. She folded her knees over to the right side and delicately put her hands in her lap. “You can tell me.†She coxed in her most sugar coated, sappy voice. You should have seen her eyes. Her long lashes batted and her eyes looked so innocent a childish, it made you almost want to pour your soul out to her. (If you’re a boy that is.)
“Well… Uhhhhhhhhhhhh….†Sora stammered.
“You don’t trust me?†She pretended to look hurt. “You can trust meâ€
Riku spoke up, “She’s a good friend, but she’s not as strong as we are and I don’t think she could handle all the adventures that we go on.†He flashed her his smile again.
My eyes lowered to a crusty stare. I muttered to myself, “Not strong enough, give me a break. Who helped fine Sora? Who made you come back to the light? He’s delirious…†I was just about to storm in and give him a piece of my mind when Sora finally talked.
“I really like her,†Finally, someone had said something good about me. I smiled. “But I like you much more.†And that smile turned straight upside down. He had that goofy grin on his face that always made my heart skip a beat. Not now. Now I was just PISSED OFF.
I walked into the treehouse, and I swear my eyes were filled with flames of fury. “Can I talk to Sora and Riku?†I said in my calmest voice of the moment, which was still shaky, had an angry tone to it, and was not my indoor voice. “Aloneâ€
“But I want to stay.†She exclaimed in her ‘I’m so innocent voice.’ “ I want to talk to them some more. They have some AMAZING stories.†She smiled her flawless smile at Sora. He started to blush again.
I was fed up with her and her ‘perfectness’. My emotion volcano exploded. “ I said, GET OUT!!!!†She just shrugged and got up and flounced out of the room. I rolled my eyes. In the doorway, she turned her head around, flipped her shinny hair around and sweetly said “Bye Sora, Bye Riku.â€. Then she did the unspoken. She blew them a kiss and left.
As soon as she went out the door, I went over to Sora and Riku and slapped them as hard as I could on their checks. Sora squealed and fell over, and Riku fell over from lack of balance.
“OW†Sora winced, “What did you do that for? And why did you maker Aura leave?â€
“Ya!†Riku gave me a mean look. “We were having a great time. And what happened to your arm?â€
“You were there when it happened. I fell when Aura pushed me. And Shut it Mr. Kairi-isn’t-strong-enough!†I glared at him.
“You heard that?†He meeped out. I just stared at him. “Wait, does that mean you were earsdropping?â€
“Wow!†I exclaimed, my voice dripping with sarcasm, “We have another Ansem!â€
Sora gave me a defeated look. “ Don’t be mad Kairi.â€
“Mad? Now why would I be mad? IM FURIOUS!!!!!â€
“Kairi, calm down. You’re just overreacting.†Riku stared at me.
“Overreacting, OVERREACTING!!!†I screamed in their faces. Sora flinched and scooted back, Riku just looked stunned. I had never been so angry before. “What’s today?†Silence. I rolled my eyes.
“Aaaaprrrilll 16th?†Sora whimpered out.
“And what happens on April 16th?†I asked questionably. I looked into their scared and fearful faces and waited for an answer. All I hear was the crashing waves on the water. My anger boiled down. A strong wind blew up and my hair fell into my face. I brushed it away with my hand. “You don’t remember do you?†Sora quickly shook his head. My eyes filled with tears. “How could you forget?†I tripped over my feet and fell backwards and grabbed the doorframe to keep me from falling. I turned around and ran.
“Kairi wait!†Sora cried. I heard him but kept running and didn’t look back. I never want to look back.
Black Room
“Her anger is astounding.†A deep voice bellowed.
“For having no darkness, her’s is growing fast. We should attack in 2 days. By then, her heart should be engulfed in darkness.â€
“Good work Aura. You will be a powerful member in the Organization.â€
“Thank you master. But I’m not done playing with her y There’s one more thing I want to do.†A high pitch laugh erupted from a black cloaked figure.†This should be fun….â€

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Please please please please post your opion. PLEASE!!!!!!!

 

I just love writing about her. SHES SO MUCH FUN TO GET ANGERY AT!!!!!!! And she reminds me of someone i hate, that sorta helps. In the later chapters, More and more is reveiled *evil cackle*

 

AHHH DARN YOU YOU WRITE SO GOOD YOUR MAKING ME WANT TO WRITE MY STORY ALL OVER AGAIN xD ehhe im so excited now I know how my friends got when they read mine ahhhhh I need to write mine ^.^ Thanks you really got my pumped xD

 

thank you. I feel so happy!!:) Now your friends will be jelous of your story *evil laugh* writing in first person i just think helps the story flow, and you can really get a feel of their emotions. Email me when your story is redone and posted!:D

Do you people think I should post a drawing of Aura? Tell me if you do.....

 

Omg!!! Keep Going! And Aura Is A B*tch!

 

Thats was good! :) Hmmm... so much anger she has. Thats actually really fun I had thought about something just like that when writing my story lol. Thats so ironic. :D

 

HA! Feel bad for Kairi :( , but surprisingly the end made me laugh! I like your story:)

 

HA! I knew it I knew Aura was working for someone... evil!!!
But I get now... first I was like woah Kairi's anger is was off :: puts mentos in diet coke:: like that :: points at it::... but know I get it!!!
Yeah, I'm random! :D

 

I no!!! She's SOOOOO much fun too write. Get all of that anger out......And she reminds me of someone i know......... actually like 20 people i know........ do you know anyone like her?

believe me... Ive been more random than that multiple times........... more like all the time. me and my friends will be walking and ill be like "OMG" they'll be like "OMG WAT????" and ill say "purty cloud" and then they stare at me........

 

Horray for Ironicness!!!!!! I live on irony. its how i live :D

 

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OMG! i'm so random too... "purty cloud" I have to ask do you just say this? Or does this sound just like my story? Sry I'm confused as usual haha :D